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Amnesia

 

Ever been balls-deep in a woman and forgot where the Hell you were at?

Not clueless
But just un-fuckn-caring

I'm talkn muscles tense
Breathing hitched
Heart thumpn
Bodies twistn
Sheets, pillows, and clothes flung all to hither and yon

Slick, slippery pussy juice everywhere
With strokes, caresses, and squeezes in perfect sync
Taking your body to infinity and beyond

I mean
Lost track of time
Of whose house you were in
How thin the walls were
And just how much Shit you'd talked 'bout givin her a dickn she'd never forget

And, now, it's all you can do to remember your own name

Ever go from just trying to "bust a nut" to the discovery that this inescapably tight, undeniably satisfying hole is actually a portal to a dimension outside linear time

And your motivation switches from doing something to this woman
To doing something with this woman
And you realize you're putting your "self" into this woman
Not just puttn something up in this woman

And, DamnIt!!, she's giving back what you're giving her in "pure, perfect Spades"

You've lost your ego
And found your soul
And decided that nothing else matches this
Or matters

And as she pulls you further into her embrace
and over the edge of The Abyss
The control you relinquish Makes room for a freedom you never imagined

And the love of a lifetime is born


Author's Note--If you've never had this experience in person
Ink from SweetKittyCat5 is damn close !!

P.S. May be a tad wordy and pretentious
Gimme a few weeks and some commentary and I'll see if I can fix that
Enjoy
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