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Like Sleeping In The Rain
You, my dear, relax me
Like rain upon a rooftop
Like the silence between each falling drop
Like the peace that descends when those wet drops go plop
Like how we snuggle contentedly
when the "love touching" stops
Breathing and listening
to drops hit the rooftop
Published 17th Sep 2021
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17th Sep 2021 7:27pm
17th Sep 2021 8:19pm
It’s nice to encounter someone who possesses that kind of energy, to help keep you feel content and at peace, and somewhat balanced after sharing their being with you.
I can’t really tolerate dramatic and frenetic types, they exhaust my being, and leave me feeling somewhat discombobulated !
A fine write…🎩
I can’t really tolerate dramatic and frenetic types, they exhaust my being, and leave me feeling somewhat discombobulated !
A fine write…🎩
17th Sep 2021 9:11pm
Mr. 300, we think that you have a little Luther Vandross in you. We love the smoothness of your pieces and their flow. We always read but sometimes we forget to comment. But your pieces are tight work dude
17th Sep 2021 9:19pm
Please keep reading
Commentary is optional, and occasionally helpful
But I love knowing that folks take a peek
Y'all make my day
Commentary is optional, and occasionally helpful
But I love knowing that folks take a peek
Y'all make my day
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- Edited 9th Apr 2022 5:45am
17th Sep 2021 10:31pm
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Anonymous
- Edited 4th Dec 2023 5:45pm
20th Sep 2021 2:17am
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26th Sep 2021 1:57pm
Nothing like the rain... Many say you can tell a lot about a person by how they respond to a rainy day!!! I dig the underlying tone of healing from the rain itself, further enhanced by sharing physical presence with great energy!!! Great piece.. Keep it going!!
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