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obscure
light and dark wisdom
in hedonistic parables
metaphors for the soul
puzzles to unlock in time
when knowledge peaks
truth will reveal itself
beauty casts a shadow
what's beautiful to some isn't to others
I find my tastes have changed with experience
revelations have occurred to open my mind
loveliness is found in the odd and macabre equally
passionate utterances whispered into the darkness
found pure by light's measure
a delicate feeling sometimes overpowering
balancing these emotions takes great patience
along the path of obscurity find yourself
Published 15th Sep 2021
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15th Sep 2021 2:52pm
The beauty found within the darkness, in the most of unlikely places, fortunately tastes are different so we all hopefully get a chance to find the one
Great piece, hope yet for us outcasts, for those who don't fit into the accepted boxes of life
Love and light,really liked this
Ron xx
Great piece, hope yet for us outcasts, for those who don't fit into the accepted boxes of life
Love and light,really liked this
Ron xx
15th Sep 2021 3:00pm
good morning dearest Ron yes there is beauty in the dark and obscure places...I feel there are beings greater than I out there I wonder after their nature and I'm told much like our own... thank you for the love this morning on this write... p.s. love can be found in the most unlikely places❤
15th Sep 2021 3:17pm
15th Sep 2021 4:01pm
This is deeply inspirational.
[passionate utterances whispered into the darkness
found pure by light's measure
a delicate feeling sometimes overpowering
balancing these emotions takes great patience]
... This is an interesting point of view. I wonder how many undertake such ventures. And what is the manifestation of such ventures. Nevertheless, I admire those who do this, and beyond that, turn these things into art.
[passionate utterances whispered into the darkness
found pure by light's measure
a delicate feeling sometimes overpowering
balancing these emotions takes great patience]
... This is an interesting point of view. I wonder how many undertake such ventures. And what is the manifestation of such ventures. Nevertheless, I admire those who do this, and beyond that, turn these things into art.
16th Sep 2021 1:26am
Wow
Metaphors in hedonistic parables
I, too, find my tastes have changed with experience
And some things I now embrace once embarrassed me
Love your perspectives
Metaphors in hedonistic parables
I, too, find my tastes have changed with experience
And some things I now embrace once embarrassed me
Love your perspectives
15th Oct 2021 6:29am
That first stanza is pretty amazing. Then you walk us through what may seem decades, as we grow old and the experiences we accumulate show us the immense secrets yet to learn.
Excellent work.
Excellent work.
15th Oct 2021 2:39pm
good morning dearest Wally thank you graciously for your thoughts on this write it's deeply appreciated I get different perspectives from each of you which is wonderful💗
