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little left
little left
now
just pieces of me
scattered across
the floor of
your heart
awaiting the ants to
spirit away the bones
to some far away,
unknown
place
now
just pieces of me
scattered across
the floor of
your heart
awaiting the ants to
spirit away the bones
to some far away,
unknown
place
Published 11th Sep 2021
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Dear BK,
Been there too. Amazingly accurate description of this type of pain.
H🌷
Been there too. Amazingly accurate description of this type of pain.
H🌷
11th Sep 2021 4:30am
14th Sep 2021 12:08pm
Wonderful structure. Interacted in my perception, in a way that was deeply reflective of the content, and took it to another level. Ending superb.
Nicely done.
Nicely done.
14th Sep 2021 5:24pm
12th Oct 2021 2:32am
Oh, unrequited love, it leaves us with so much despair but with treasured inspiration.
Wonderful write BK.
Wonderful write BK.
