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Know that you are real
Know that you are real
It started with a quick hello, a messege sent across the line, now your all I think about and how you look so fine
I close my eyes and you are there, I dream of your pretty smiles, its amazing how close you feel to me, though we're devided by so many miles
The distance between us is closed by things share across the internet, I feel like we are getting closer, though we've never met
I wonder what it would feel like, to feel you skin to skin, a chance to hold you in my arms, so i let my dream begin
For within my dreams you are here beyond all space and time, when I'm in my dream like world, it feels like you are mine
Distance is irrelevant, the real world just counts for nought, though I miss you in the morning, I love the happiness you've brought
So I thank you for reaching out and for all the messages we share, I know you are so far away but I wish that I was there
There to say good morning, to be the last thing you see at night, to hold your body close to me, no matter if it's dark or light
Then I wouldn't have to dream of you, or guess how your kisses feel, because I could kiss you tenderly and know that you are real
Ron
It started with a quick hello, a messege sent across the line, now your all I think about and how you look so fine
I close my eyes and you are there, I dream of your pretty smiles, its amazing how close you feel to me, though we're devided by so many miles
The distance between us is closed by things share across the internet, I feel like we are getting closer, though we've never met
I wonder what it would feel like, to feel you skin to skin, a chance to hold you in my arms, so i let my dream begin
For within my dreams you are here beyond all space and time, when I'm in my dream like world, it feels like you are mine
Distance is irrelevant, the real world just counts for nought, though I miss you in the morning, I love the happiness you've brought
So I thank you for reaching out and for all the messages we share, I know you are so far away but I wish that I was there
There to say good morning, to be the last thing you see at night, to hold your body close to me, no matter if it's dark or light
Then I wouldn't have to dream of you, or guess how your kisses feel, because I could kiss you tenderly and know that you are real
Ron
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Re. Know that you are real
Anonymous
11th Sep 2021 2:28am
Awe Ron……so many things I could say here……this is so personal to me……..brings back special memories……that I can’t put into words……..I’m happy for you to have found a beautiful luv that has inspired your outstanding luving words……wishing all the best to you and your luv…….RL for me…….purple luv & hugs xo :)
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11th Sep 2021 2:32am
It's sadly fiction sweetheart, there's no dream girl. But even a broken poet has dreams and hopes
Thank you as always
Love and light
Ron n xx
Thank you as always
Love and light
Ron n xx
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Anonymous
12th Sep 2021 1:56am
Awe Ron……..
Broken Poet
When I look at your avatar
I don’t see a “broken poet”
Specially when I’ve read your writes
Some so beautiful they bring a tear
Others so powerful I’m glad I read them
Cause their a glimpse of your passionate soul
Oh and of course the sexy ones
That make my heart sigh
Body begs me to turn the fan on high
Thanks for the inspiration my friend…….keep on dreaming……never lose hope…….please never stop writing…….you’re amazing 🌸
Broken Poet
When I look at your avatar
I don’t see a “broken poet”
Specially when I’ve read your writes
Some so beautiful they bring a tear
Others so powerful I’m glad I read them
Cause their a glimpse of your passionate soul
Oh and of course the sexy ones
That make my heart sigh
Body begs me to turn the fan on high
Thanks for the inspiration my friend…….keep on dreaming……never lose hope…….please never stop writing…….you’re amazing 🌸
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12th Sep 2021 2:00am
Oh my Purple princess that's such a beautiful write. I'm laying here at 2am in the dark smiling like a Cheshire cat.
Thank you so much
Love and light
Ron xx
Thank you so much
Love and light
Ron xx
Re. Know that you are real
11th Sep 2021 3:20pm
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11th Sep 2021 3:27pm
Thank you my logo is my mark of respect to all lives lost
Love and light
Ron
Love and light
Ron
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11th Sep 2021 3:40pm
Re. Know that you are real
12th Sep 2021 00:14am
I know for my own experiences that It's not all necessarily fiction, when I put pen to paper .... a tiny bit of truth sneaks in..... sometimes it's a dream of what could be..... In my eyes, that's what I takeaway from your poem.... I guess it's subjective .... Regardless, it's so utterly moving and deeply heartfelt, Ron..... Via a piece of reality or not.....
I adored it!
Sending all my warmest hugs and appreciation..
🌹 - 💙
B
I adored it!
Sending all my warmest hugs and appreciation..
🌹 - 💙
B
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12th Sep 2021 1:18am
Thank you beautiful I'm glad you liked it, I guess every dream as a touch of truth or hope
Thank you as always my sweetest poetess
Love and light
Ron x
Thank you as always my sweetest poetess
Love and light
Ron x
Re. Know that you are real
12th Sep 2021 1:44pm
This is so beautiful and your words reach into hearts, you have super powers
NG 🌹
NG 🌹
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12th Sep 2021 2:35pm
Thank you NG. I'm loving the idea of you feeling my poetry. I guess it's what we as poets hope for
Love and light
Ron x
Love and light
Ron x
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13th Sep 2021 2:40am
I love scary stuff and clowns are awesome
I'm delighted you enjoyed this one and it was a nice ending to your weekend
Sending hugs across the void.
love and light
Ron xxx
I'm delighted you enjoyed this one and it was a nice ending to your weekend
Sending hugs across the void.
love and light
Ron xxx
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Re. Know that you are real
13th Sep 2021 6:22pm
Wow! Absolutely beautiful... Such tender n loving sentiments....
I must say , you are the master of rhyming....
Really enjoyed this spectacular poem 👍😊🌷
I must say , you are the master of rhyming....
Really enjoyed this spectacular poem 👍😊🌷
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13th Sep 2021 9:21pm
Thank you so very much I'm delighted you enjoyed my ramblings
Thank you for the lovely review
Love and light
Ron xx
Thank you for the lovely review
Love and light
Ron xx
Re. Know that you are real
18th Sep 2021 1:07am
Yep, been there a few times myself, mate. Sometimes that's what keeps us going, to believe & be inspired, if nothing else.
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18th Sep 2021 1:28am