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Queen Anne's Revenge
Ship slipped
into
Slip stream
of
waves
That waved
As
Splashes
Splashed
Brash
In spritzes
capturing
moonlight
&
Night
Breaking away
into
Spiral shaped eddies
Into
travels
in
Travels
&
spirals
in
Spirals
Published 7th Sep 2021
Author's Note
... Thinking about how we are like ships.
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7th Sep 2021 6:10pm
We like to compare everything to the sea, the universe with everything in it bobbing and swirling, the planets, the human body and all that bobs and swirl within us, even emotions and all of this hatred raging today. Tight work dude
8th Sep 2021 1:45pm
8th Sep 2021 11:04am
Nice engaging write ... love the ship metaphor ... well poeted here ... bravo Cipher ...
8th Sep 2021 1:46pm
