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MIDDLE FINGER DOWN
MIDDLE FINGER DOWN
Oh, those sacred
moments when the
cold metal kisses your
skull and you tell
the world that you want
to sleep forever.
In silence.
Alone.
With one index finger twitching
the trigger
and still one
middle finger down...........
..............................OH.....
Those incomplete moments.............
Oh, those sacred
moments when the
cold metal kisses your
skull and you tell
the world that you want
to sleep forever.
In silence.
Alone.
With one index finger twitching
the trigger
and still one
middle finger down...........
..............................OH.....
Those incomplete moments.............
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Re. MIDDLE FINGER DOWN
7th Sep 2021 6:18pm
There has been a many a many worlds created and or rebuilt within that split second, stay strong dude
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9th Sep 2021 10:48am
Re. MIDDLE FINGER DOWN
8th Sep 2021 00:45am
That's Artists/Poets do...see magnified every moment,every movement I detail
some expression Archie.
some expression Archie.
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Re. MIDDLE FINGER DOWN
Anonymous
8th Sep 2021 00:51am
Really like this--
Very evocative.
Title is darkly ambiguous--nice!
Like the way the cold metal of the barrel is introduced without drawing attention to it--the understatement works well.
I guess the line about telling the world you want to sleep forever lets me down a bit--who is this world, to the speaker?
Who would be the minions and familiars tormenting the speaker, whom he wishes to turn his back to, forever, through death? What torments drive him?
This reader wants to know--I'm drawn in through the understatement and ambiguity.
Enjoyed!
Very evocative.
Title is darkly ambiguous--nice!
Like the way the cold metal of the barrel is introduced without drawing attention to it--the understatement works well.
I guess the line about telling the world you want to sleep forever lets me down a bit--who is this world, to the speaker?
Who would be the minions and familiars tormenting the speaker, whom he wishes to turn his back to, forever, through death? What torments drive him?
This reader wants to know--I'm drawn in through the understatement and ambiguity.
Enjoyed!
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9th Sep 2021 10:45am
This is a fictional situation about an individual
who is on the brink of suicide.
He holds his (HER) gun to the head,
waiting to point their middle finger
at the world as they pull the trigger.
They are alone.
They are in this alone.
They do not pull the trigger.
They keep the middle finger down.
---still alive---next scene---
who is on the brink of suicide.
He holds his (HER) gun to the head,
waiting to point their middle finger
at the world as they pull the trigger.
They are alone.
They are in this alone.
They do not pull the trigger.
They keep the middle finger down.
---still alive---next scene---
Re. MIDDLE FINGER DOWN
Anonymous
8th Sep 2021 00:51am
and liked!
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Re. MIDDLE FINGER DOWN
5th Oct 2021 4:25pm
Thank you ! I appreciate that…💙
And, if some meth head didn’t comment on that thread, I’d delete it too…🙏😇
And, if some meth head didn’t comment on that thread, I’d delete it too…🙏😇
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Re. MIDDLE FINGER DOWN
6th Oct 2021 4:20am
I don't know what the fuck you're talking about, shadow---starzzz, . I drink. I smoke cigaretts .
I write.
I write.
Re. MIDDLE FINGER DOWN
6th Oct 2021 7:44am
I was talking about the RACIST post you posted, which you then deleted ! I guess you were pissed, and thought it was socially acceptable at the time.
I forgive you, just don’t be a racist, there’s no need !
And. Just so you know, I also asked admin to delete the post I posted in the Forums, after you deleted your post, just so your arse wasn’t exposed to the entire site roasting it for being a racist nutcase.
Oh. Man. Just breathe, and stop acting like a disillusioned man-child for fucks sake…🙄
I forgive you, just don’t be a racist, there’s no need !
And. Just so you know, I also asked admin to delete the post I posted in the Forums, after you deleted your post, just so your arse wasn’t exposed to the entire site roasting it for being a racist nutcase.
Oh. Man. Just breathe, and stop acting like a disillusioned man-child for fucks sake…🙄
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1st Nov 2021 11:47am
Re: Re. MIDDLE FINGER DOWN
1st Nov 2021 2:11pm
Oh. Really ?! A bit of a delayed reaction; so tell us how you really feel, Archie.
By the way, I enjoy fucking myself as I cum sooner, multiple times…🥳🤩😻
By the way, I enjoy fucking myself as I cum sooner, multiple times…🥳🤩😻
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26th Nov 2021 3:07pm
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26th Nov 2021 3:13pm
Re. MIDDLE FINGER DOWN
6th Oct 2021 11:04am
I'm not a racist. At least half of my friends are of different skin tone and culture. One of my best friends of the past, Karzan, was an atheist Iraq refugee who introduced me to Ramstein. They would not let us in to the club, because he was from Iraq. RACIST. If a black person steals from me, I will call them what they are.
Re. MIDDLE FINGER DOWN
6th Oct 2021 1:09pm
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6th Oct 2021 1:12pm
Re. MIDDLE FINGER DOWN
Kick me out, and the Phoenix will rise back up, the same bird with a different name......