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Baggage
In line at baggage claim
Becomes a place to bide
For luggage without the desideratum
To give us empyrean incentives
Becomes a place to bide
For luggage without the desideratum
To give us empyrean incentives
Published 6th Sep 2021
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6th Sep 2021 11:55pm
You just taught me 2 new words that I've never seen/heard before. Desideratum and empyrean.
7th Sep 2021 00:04am
I am grateful you have taken something of importance from my poem and may you use the annotations in one of your future piece, sir
7th Sep 2021 6:26am
7th Sep 2021 00:53am
da_poetic-edifier (Damon) beat me to it in his observation.
This is another one of your many teachable moments from your wealth of wisdom.
It always feels very formal when I refer to you as Madam but when interacting you always address me as Sir.
I hope you are keeping well, poetess
This is another one of your many teachable moments from your wealth of wisdom.
It always feels very formal when I refer to you as Madam but when interacting you always address me as Sir.
I hope you are keeping well, poetess
9th Sep 2021 9:48am
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25th Dec 2021 6:59am
I enjoyed seeing the word empyrean being used. This poem felt like a opening a piece of chocolate and taking a delicious bite of poetry.
LJ
LJ
25th Dec 2021 7:04am
