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Rainy day
't is a rainy day
Rain outside
Rain inside
As tears flow
Tears of anger
Tears of frustration,
Fists bang on the
Table
Asking why
Wondering why
The stupidity
Of being born
Rain outside
Rain inside
As tears flow
Tears of anger
Tears of frustration,
Fists bang on the
Table
Asking why
Wondering why
The stupidity
Of being born
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Re. Rainy day
6th Sep 2021 10:16pm
So spot-on, been there and have the T-shirt. Thanks and peace, (O) xoxo,
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Re: Re. Rainy day
6th Sep 2021 10:51pm
"Have the T-shirt". That's just an expression of slang for "It has happened so many, many times; so much they have printed T-shirts. Hugs and peace. (O)
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Re: Re. Rainy day
6th Sep 2021 11:51pm
Re: Re. Rainy day
6th Sep 2021 11:54pm
Thanks for the reply and understanding. Yes, language, especially slang, can miss the communication target. Not a kiss, however. (O)
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6th Sep 2021 11:56pm
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Re. Rainy day
17th Sep 2021 3:19am
Maddens will cause a person to do things they may regret later on. Hopefully not in a jail cell with Bubba looking at you while he sits on the toilet.
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17th Sep 2021 3:49am
Re. Rainy day
10th Oct 2021 9:30pm
The questions run deep, reflective of the soul and all the pain that surfaces spilling on to the page.
Strong write. Hope all is well.
Strong write. Hope all is well.
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10th Oct 2021 10:00pm