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RESULTS FROM YOUR POEMS
WONDERFUL
When I see
your image and
know you are
there, my heart
skips a beat,
my face glows
with warmness,
a stirring occurs
in my loins.
YOU!
I read a new
or an old poem;
the results are
the same...I
want all of you,
nose to toes.
I send covert poetic
messages which
are targeted for you,
BUT
they end missing
your awareness so
no response is
returned...but
that's okay I will
inhale you through
your poems, so
PLEASE
keep on writings.
Your name?
Oh, YOU know
who you are!
When I see
your image and
know you are
there, my heart
skips a beat,
my face glows
with warmness,
a stirring occurs
in my loins.
YOU!
I read a new
or an old poem;
the results are
the same...I
want all of you,
nose to toes.
I send covert poetic
messages which
are targeted for you,
BUT
they end missing
your awareness so
no response is
returned...but
that's okay I will
inhale you through
your poems, so
PLEASE
keep on writings.
Your name?
Oh, YOU know
who you are!
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Re. RESULTS FROM YOUR POEMS
1st Sep 2021 10:45pm
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1st Sep 2021 10:52pm
Re. RESULTS FROM YOUR POEMS
1st Sep 2021 11:04pm
Hmmm . . .you'll make everyone wonder. Is it me?
Love the covert connection.
Love the covert connection.
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2nd Sep 2021 1:59am
Re. RESULTS FROM YOUR POEMS
1st Sep 2021 11:04pm
Truly lovely, Oral ..... Your muse is certainly special, to inspire, so.
Really excellent admiring, write!
🌹 - B
Really excellent admiring, write!
🌹 - B
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2nd Sep 2021 2:54am
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2nd Sep 2021 2:55am
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2nd Sep 2021 2:43am
Wow whoever your muse is she must be soooooo lucky to have such an amazing ode to her. Keep it up man and looking forward to more poems!🤘🏽🤘🏽
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11th Sep 2021 9:12pm
Thank you for your kind comment, only wish SHE knew. Have a positive rest of the day and keep writing. Hugs and peace, (OO)
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12th Sep 2021 1:40pm
Thank you for your sound and gracious advice. I think she may know or have an idea but I've done dumb things in trying to avoid mistakes I made before in other relationships I'm trying to figure out how to overcome those. Have an amazing and positive day. Hugs and peace, (OO)
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12th Sep 2021 7:29pm
Absolutely true, sometimes we may think we are doing something to avoid being taken advantage of, etc. and it turns out to be a mistake, misperception based on past negatives. YES! I've learned my lesson; I'm slow but when I get the lesson it sticks. Thanks for your gracious and wise advice. Hugs and peace, (OO)