vexed

Damn

Hot photo and flow

BIG LUST LIKE

thank you graciously dearest poet I loved your response to this I think a  photo should nicely accompany a poem I really weigh the in and outs of the picture too... I'm happy this worked for you❤

I enjoyed “vexed” very much.  I liked the inner conflict you portrayed so seamlessly

thank you graciously dearest poet I'm happy you enjoyed I appreciate your thoughts very much❤

That was absolutely erotica at its best. Brilliant write. I loved it
Love and light
Ron x

thank you graciously dearest Ron for the love on this write💕

...  Wonderful vibration, that you have seized upon & rendered electric.

...  Perfect song selection, of course, you are so adept at pairing the music to the piece, which just adds levels to your art form.  (And the choice of pics...  Oh yes...)

...  You are a true artist & I relish your works.  :)))

aw thank you dearest Cipher it's funny I listen to music as I write it seems the two always were meant to go together... the pics I just look for one that resonates in me that's sometimes hard to find one that resonates but also goes with the poem...I cherish your thoughts dear poet❤

Things I like:

1. the meter--which tends to be handled well, and evolves with the poem, but also intelligently. In particular, the metrical pattern of stanzas 1 & 2 are purposeful & effective;
2. the way the poem--through meter--slows down with the line "lingering doubts spoke";
3. the way the poem ends with a sense of the burden of regrets, things wanted not partaken.

What I'd change--change some of the lines, to enhance the effectiveness of some of the metrical patterns.
Enjoyed!

thank you dearest Mark for such a thoughtful critique I struggle with meter at times... I'll know my poem has an internal flow and I'll break it not always knowing the best way to fix it... I'm happy this worked for you❤

Edging over the ledge....desire and emotional expression create a pathway......the words commit....and anticipation is so very different from expectation....ironic.....want becomes a need.

thank you dearest RT for such a thoughtful comment I deeply appreciate it💕

The song in that video would make good apt background music. The singer gets the answer to her impassioned question in the last verse, I can visualise.

Can't help also to comment on the picture - she looks a temptress with the horn like hair knots. An undercurrent of temptation flows through your piece from pic down.

hi there dearest Solomon thank you for reading and leaving such a sexy comment... I deeply appreciate your thoughts❤

concrete erotica..
photo :-)
.. lust just burst into 🔥..


OG RESPECT

good morning dearest OG again forgive my late response I get so behind here sometimes I deeply appreciate the love you've shown me thank you❤

Sensual write indeed.
"totally besotten and bespelled" just shows how one can certainly fall under the spell without really knowing it, and just relishing in it.

Nicely done.

hello dearest Wally yes bespelled it happens you know lust you know thank you for reading and leaving a thoughtful comment❤