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Confidant
thoughts condense as
inky precipitation,
on a dry piece of paper
soaking every feeling... emotion,
the manuscript embodies
dead secrets and lost fantasies
soul imprinted forever
on a lifeless piece of paper.
inky precipitation,
on a dry piece of paper
soaking every feeling... emotion,
the manuscript embodies
dead secrets and lost fantasies
soul imprinted forever
on a lifeless piece of paper.
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Re. Confidant
27th Aug 2021 12:52pm
I love poems about writing . I really like the contrasts that you offer in this piece.. i.e. condense/precipitation and dry, embodies and dead and soul and lifeless. It divides the deep spiritual journey from the seemingly simple material manifestation. quite effective. Great write!
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Re: Re. Confidant
29th Aug 2021 7:14am
Thank you so much, dear poetess... I really liked your review.... Loved the way you dissected my piece.... Thanks for stopping by :)
Re. Confidant
27th Aug 2021 12:57pm
Re: Re. Confidant
29th Aug 2021 7:16am
So glad you liked it, dear Ron... Thanks for the read and the Uplifting feedback :)
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27th Aug 2021 1:25pm
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29th Aug 2021 7:14am
Re. Confidant
27th Aug 2021 5:04pm
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27th Aug 2021 8:16pm
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- Edited 25th Oct 2022 6:45pm
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29th Aug 2021 7:20am
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28th Aug 2021 00:29am
Re. Confidant
29th Aug 2021 00:34am
Good write! That lifeless piece of paper is now a living, breathing work of art! All because of you! Thank you.
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29th Aug 2021 7:21am
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Anonymous
6th Apr 2022 5:28pm
i like the honest simplicity of this...but that paper isnt lifeless once your pen bleeds onto it
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6th Apr 2022 5:39pm