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Between Lovers
There's a kinetic energy
Between lovers
Unspoken
It floats in aura
Supreme
Bold but sublime
There are things
I want to say to you
I can't, so I write these poems
I'm around you on every corner
In your rear view mirror
A voice telling our story
Between lovers
Unspoken
It floats in aura
Supreme
Bold but sublime
There are things
I want to say to you
I can't, so I write these poems
I'm around you on every corner
In your rear view mirror
A voice telling our story
Author's Note
Quiet romantic thoughts
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Re. Between Lovers
25th Aug 2021 2:34pm
You've created another A+ write. Thanks for sharing and have a write day, hugs, O
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25th Aug 2021 3:02pm
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25th Aug 2021 3:04pm
Oh, the magic of emotions and longings for whatever IT may be... Hugs and peace, O
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25th Aug 2021 6:27pm
This is really soft and sweet, I'm enjoying this piece. I tell husband all the time, that there is a naturally occurring vibe. Whenever that vibe is off I am uneasy. I have a hard time saying words, poetry just comes more naturally to express the feeling.
~LJ
~LJ
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25th Aug 2021 7:59pm
Often it's easier to write love in a poem, people are just uneasy with actual validation of what is ....
I'm glad this struck a chord
Thx for the RL
I'm glad this struck a chord
Thx for the RL
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