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Everyday
Come on baby, I’m addicted, it’s a necessity, something I desire from you, it has to be hot, you know what to do
I’m crazy about your thick cream, please serve me in bed, I want to sip what you give me, my desires must be fed
I’ll require it more than just once a day, to avoid withdraw I’ll need a fix in the morning, noon and night, your kiss is the only sweetener I want with this delight
Yours is the best, it just flows smoothly and is temptingly robust, amazing consistency, it’s something I lust
I know when you’re about to come, my senses start to perk, it’s the best way to start my morning especially before work
I know when it’s going to happen, I know when it’s close, as soon as the door opens it’s time for my dose
Others have tried it, yes honey I know it’s true, no need for debate, your taste is hard to resist, the coffee you make is deliciously great!
I’m crazy about your thick cream, please serve me in bed, I want to sip what you give me, my desires must be fed
I’ll require it more than just once a day, to avoid withdraw I’ll need a fix in the morning, noon and night, your kiss is the only sweetener I want with this delight
Yours is the best, it just flows smoothly and is temptingly robust, amazing consistency, it’s something I lust
I know when you’re about to come, my senses start to perk, it’s the best way to start my morning especially before work
I know when it’s going to happen, I know when it’s close, as soon as the door opens it’s time for my dose
Others have tried it, yes honey I know it’s true, no need for debate, your taste is hard to resist, the coffee you make is deliciously great!
Author's Note
Colombian roast medium bodied with hints of chocolate, cream no sugar
Artwork by me ☕️ 😉
Artwork by me ☕️ 😉
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Re. Everyday
19th Aug 2021 7:51pm
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19th Aug 2021 8:04pm
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Anonymous
19th Aug 2021 7:56pm
So clever! By the 3rd stanza I couldn’t stop thinking about coffee! Can’t live without it!
Kudos on the art! Bravo en ambos! 💜💜
Kudos on the art! Bravo en ambos! 💜💜

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19th Aug 2021 8:03pm
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20th Aug 2021 4:37am
Dear NG,
Excellent play on words. I’m all for double entendres. Love the art work. Absolutely fantastic colors and subject matter and who doesn’t love peaches ?😉
Really fun write. H🌷
Excellent play on words. I’m all for double entendres. Love the art work. Absolutely fantastic colors and subject matter and who doesn’t love peaches ?😉
Really fun write. H🌷
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Re: Re. Everyday
20th Aug 2021 5:00am
Thanks so much! 🌹
I’m glad you caught on to the shape and reference of the art 😁
I’m glad you caught on to the shape and reference of the art 😁
Re. Everyday
20th Aug 2021 6:57am
Like the picture, I can see a few people hinting 'What does it remind you of?'
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20th Aug 2021 5:27pm
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20th Aug 2021 3:18pm
Great set up and lead to the climax, pass the coffee. Bravo. Hugs and peace, O
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24th Aug 2021 8:58pm
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25th Aug 2021 2:20am
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30th Aug 2021 11:35pm
Yeah, that is exactly what it was that came to mind, not that other thing, while figuring out the right dose.
Hasta luego!
Hasta luego!
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4th Sep 2021 2:31pm
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6th Sep 2021 9:08am
By the way, I have full appreciation for the picture you chose.... double entendre... even more so with the peaches. You can't hide talent.
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6th Sep 2021 8:39pm
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14th Sep 2021 2:46pm
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15th Sep 2021 4:24am
Peaches and cream, if you like the taste you will never leave him. You will be addicted to him as l am to you. xx Goddess
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15th Sep 2021 5:11am
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15th Sep 2021 6:51am
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17th Sep 2021 1:57am
Thank you so much for the wonderful review! I’m very happy you like it!
NG 🌹
NG 🌹
Re. Everyday
22nd Sep 2021 3:33pm
Awesome double entendre, such skillful word play; every line carries multiple meanings so perfectly. So creative. The art work is an incredible compliment as always; love the colors and textures. The love for coffee and other things so wonderfully captured here. ;)
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Re. Everyday
22nd Sep 2021 5:04pm
Thank you kindly, I’m so glad you enjoyed this! I’m so appreciative of your reviews!
NG 💝
NG 💝
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9th Nov 2021 1:42pm
Lol! Thank you for taking the time to read so many of my poems! Btw, I hope your coffee was great this morning 😁☕️
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9th Nov 2021 2:47pm
Thank you so very much!
I’m having coffee right now also lol!
I hope you have a wonderful day!
☕️ 💫💥☀️
I’m having coffee right now also lol!
I hope you have a wonderful day!
☕️ 💫💥☀️
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Re. Everyday
10th Nov 2021 4:37am
I am a fan of the poem and the tribute to the brew.
You view of normal ordinary things is very refreshing and new. Thanks for the pick me up and the sensual romp. I will never look at coffee the same thanks to you.
You view of normal ordinary things is very refreshing and new. Thanks for the pick me up and the sensual romp. I will never look at coffee the same thanks to you.
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10th Nov 2021 4:47am