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The Garden of 'EE'den
Sittin on the pub steps we three,
you, a glass Coke bottle and me,
two thin straws sat knee to knee
summer as warm as first kisses can be.
you, a glass Coke bottle and me,
two thin straws sat knee to knee
summer as warm as first kisses can be.
Published 19th Aug 2021
Author's Note
When Mam and dad where in the pub and supper was a packet of crisps
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20th Aug 2021 4:43am
Dear R,
Nostalgic and charming poem. I thought this very sweet and reminiscent of a more naive time in life. H🌷
Nostalgic and charming poem. I thought this very sweet and reminiscent of a more naive time in life. H🌷
20th Aug 2021 2:24pm
Thank you H, really pleased by your kind comments and yes indeed from a time when everything seemed to be more simple. Best Keith
20th Aug 2021 2:26pm
8th Sep 2021 7:45pm
22nd Aug 2021 2:31pm
8th Sep 2021 7:46pm
Thank you Ursa, very pleased that this comes across, really appreciate your comments. Best Keith
30th Aug 2021 3:22pm
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