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Punchbag druggie
Caught with a headache trapped in a sound
prisms of glass all around
Shapes and colors
So profound
Fuck your reality
This is my crown
I am king, on my mushroom throne
Break my body and shatter my bone
You can't break a heart of stone
prisms of glass all around
Shapes and colors
So profound
Fuck your reality
This is my crown
I am king, on my mushroom throne
Break my body and shatter my bone
You can't break a heart of stone
Published 18th Aug 2021
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18th Aug 2021 8:09pm
20th Aug 2021 8:41am
22nd Aug 2021 6:34pm
Wow.... this is truly potent and impactful. I love the rhyming flow.... great job!
Welcome to DUP!
🌹 - B
Welcome to DUP!
🌹 - B
Anonymous
27th Aug 2021 8:01pm
Hey there and welcome to the DU.
I loved that this is tagged as bittersweet. The description is very much that — it comes across as desperate and optimistic all at the same time.
Thank you for sharing.
-M
I loved that this is tagged as bittersweet. The description is very much that — it comes across as desperate and optimistic all at the same time.
Thank you for sharing.
-M
28th Aug 2021 3:59pm
I like the rhyming, the amount of meaning packed into a short poem, and the defiance. Well done.
13th Feb 2022 9:24pm
