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day tripper
my soul arcs then flairs
something is on the winds
I can feel it
gentle stirrings tell me to be calm
I whisper prayers to the silent void
it echos back
thoughts come to mind
I turn them over slowly
tentatively thinking about each one
some stick inside me
I ask the universe to forgive me
eternity smiles within
I am a child of the stars
held true to myself
a reflection to behold
a misfit day tripping through time
to arrive at my destinations on time
a revelation of faith
to be unveiled
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Re. day tripper
18th Aug 2021 00:46am
Awesome just flowing through the universe, this is amazing. I really enjoyed this great write
Love and light
Ron x
Love and light
Ron x
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Re: Re. day tripper
18th Aug 2021 00:50am
good afternoon dearest Ron just kind of thinking this is really what I do mainly at night as I'm trying to drift off to sleep my life or day will come to me and some of my choices make me feel bad and so I give it back to the universe with hopes I do better given the chance... thank you for the love here❤
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Anonymous
18th Aug 2021 2:52am
Awe Crim…….powerful yet gentle words tug at my heart…….I listened to the song…….I could hear your words among its beauty…….thank you for sharing this……gorgeous all the way thru……just like you…….purple luv & hugs xo :)

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Re: Re. day tripper
18th Aug 2021 3:21am
good evening beautiful Flower thank you lovely one I'm happy you enjoyed the poem and the song❤
Re. day tripper
18th Aug 2021 4:19am
You are a beautiful reflection of the celestial being that gifted you to us
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Re: Re. day tripper
18th Aug 2021 4:28pm
aw thank you dearest poet I try to be to my best ability I cherish your thoughts have a great day❤
Re. day tripper
18th Aug 2021 9:30am
I completely concur with FATBOY.
Your writing interacts in such a magical manner, in my mind.
This is such a beautiful write.
(Love Mazzy Star.)
Your writing interacts in such a magical manner, in my mind.
This is such a beautiful write.
(Love Mazzy Star.)
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Re: Re. day tripper
18th Aug 2021 4:29pm
thank you dearest Cipher for such a beautiful comment I deeply cherish your thoughts have a lovely day today💕
Re. day tripper
18th Aug 2021 10:22am
Dear B,
Oh boy, you sure did sum up life brilliantly in this poem. And if that was great enough this phrase-
“ a misfit day tripping through time
to arrive at my destinations on time” summed up my entire existence. One of your finest! Really lovely write. H🌷
Oh boy, you sure did sum up life brilliantly in this poem. And if that was great enough this phrase-
“ a misfit day tripping through time
to arrive at my destinations on time” summed up my entire existence. One of your finest! Really lovely write. H🌷
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Re: Re. day tripper
18th Aug 2021 4:31pm
good morning beautiful Honoria I'm so happy this poem spoke to you you made my morning brighter with such a lovely comment... thank you kind soul have a wonderful day today❤
Re. day tripper
18th Aug 2021 11:01am
“my soul arcs then flairs” a truly beautiful first line that got me then followed all the way through. Real pretty. And you’ll always be forgiven Ms Crim. Always.
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Re: Re. day tripper
18th Aug 2021 4:32pm
hey there dearest Twitch so happy to see you... thank you for such a lovely comment and for visiting me I hope life is treating you good💕
Re. day tripper
18th Aug 2021 5:08pm
crimsin,
This sounds so child-like and serene, but with a warning sticker applied somewhere….. maybe I haven’t “ turn them over slowly” enough to find it yet? 😊 Great thoughts in this one that have senses soaring.
down2dirt
This sounds so child-like and serene, but with a warning sticker applied somewhere….. maybe I haven’t “ turn them over slowly” enough to find it yet? 😊 Great thoughts in this one that have senses soaring.
down2dirt
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Re: Re. day tripper
18th Aug 2021 6:46pm
good morning Down2 thank you for reading and leaving your thoughts I really do this turn my thoughts over in my mind I deeply appreciate the thoughtful comment❤
Re. day tripper
19th Aug 2021 9:33am
Awesome brill muse and i esp liked the last stanza. Kudos!
Plz do just read my newest poem too,
Plz do just read my newest poem too,
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Re: Re. day tripper
22nd Aug 2021 3:24pm
good morning beautiful poetess thank you for the lovely comment I deeply appreciate you reading💕