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First Bait
Slender and tan in the sun, she fumbled with her bait.
I asked if I could help.
“Yes,” and she smiled.
As she held her line up to me, I tied the bait carefully while watching the rise and fall of her chest.
Her sweaty fingers touched mine and it was magic.
I asked if I could help.
“Yes,” and she smiled.
As she held her line up to me, I tied the bait carefully while watching the rise and fall of her chest.
Her sweaty fingers touched mine and it was magic.
Published 16th Aug 2021
Author's Note
This early experience at a pond near my home changed me.
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Anonymous
16th Aug 2021 12:34pm
Something like that would change me too ☺️
16th Aug 2021 1:06pm
16th Aug 2021 4:13pm
What a lovely depiction of an intense and erotically infused meet cute.... I love the pic, too.
Great ink
🌹 - B
Great ink
🌹 - B
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