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an ode to 3am thoughts
stirring but not lost
rhythmic as a butterfly's net
only to catch if i so try ...hmm,
i can not but for a moment to you lie.
i too have thoughts upon the chime of that hour of three.
how i hang on them
how when i put them to rhyme, they make me free.
the meter and the flow
back to sleep i do go.
for in an hours time, the chime becomes four...
only to have more words, knocking upon my dream's door.
stirring but not lost
rhythmic as a butterfly's net
only to catch if i so try ...hmm,
i can not but for a moment to you lie.
i too have thoughts upon the chime of that hour of three.
how i hang on them
how when i put them to rhyme, they make me free.
the meter and the flow
back to sleep i do go.
for in an hours time, the chime becomes four...
only to have more words, knocking upon my dream's door.
Published 12th Aug 2021
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12th Aug 2021 5:50pm
Dear M,
What a lovely dreamscape I found this write. My own last night was odd, what’s bits I could remember. Your poem drew me in like a fantastical reverie. Those wee hours are the best for poems and thoughts from the true heart.
Great write. H🌷
What a lovely dreamscape I found this write. My own last night was odd, what’s bits I could remember. Your poem drew me in like a fantastical reverie. Those wee hours are the best for poems and thoughts from the true heart.
Great write. H🌷
12th Aug 2021 5:58pm
Thanks for reading and commenting.
NightDepth's "3 A.M. thoughts" set the quill in motion.
those late/early hours do seem to tell one's true story.
later in the day we have a tendency to protect and shield.
NightDepth's "3 A.M. thoughts" set the quill in motion.
those late/early hours do seem to tell one's true story.
later in the day we have a tendency to protect and shield.
Anonymous
12th Aug 2021 6:32pm
Life is such a mystery. I cannot say what I think at the hour of 3.
Beautiful words.
Beautiful words.
12th Aug 2021 6:33pm
16th Aug 2021 2:05am
Hey Mystic……luv this dreamy ink…….brilliantly written…….purple luv & hugs xo :)
16th Aug 2021 2:27am
16th Aug 2021 3:22am
Magic happens during those twilight hours; albeit whilst awakened drowsily to meet the urgency of a lovers need !
Such a gorgeous write…
Such a gorgeous write…
16th Aug 2021 10:01am
thank you for your insight on the magic of the twilight hours.
i appreciate you taking the time to read and comment.
i appreciate you taking the time to read and comment.
