deepundergroundpoetry.com
It Was Nuns Apart
I respect our freedom
But it’s nice to know the path is there
If we need it
Gosh, lovely thing
You make me feel like a rock-star
I hope the paparazzi don’t catch up with me
The beast, he could not help it
Show yourself, declare your habits
Share a ritual or two
Yes, her spells
I’m listening
I hope she might be too
Save me! We interjected
Heard waves below
Saw cliffs
A few rocks, much sand
The sound of them, thrashing in
Foam lovely & silent
Why not?
Mark it for now
Before the wash away
The dicing with death, & violence
Our momentary retreat
Then the pictures, of our rescue
But it’s nice to know the path is there
If we need it
Gosh, lovely thing
You make me feel like a rock-star
I hope the paparazzi don’t catch up with me
The beast, he could not help it
Show yourself, declare your habits
Share a ritual or two
Yes, her spells
I’m listening
I hope she might be too
Save me! We interjected
Heard waves below
Saw cliffs
A few rocks, much sand
The sound of them, thrashing in
Foam lovely & silent
Why not?
Mark it for now
Before the wash away
The dicing with death, & violence
Our momentary retreat
Then the pictures, of our rescue
Published 9th Aug 2021
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
likes 2
reading list entries 1
comments 2
reads 285
Commenting Preference:
The author is looking for friendly feedback.
10th Aug 2021 10:21am
I feel like I'm stalking you, Spanker... I am totally not.. lol ... but I am trying to finish a reading challenge on DU and your poems keep popping up within it asking for comments to be left ... hahaha.... (I can't say that I'm disappointed, because I am so grateful that it's your poems! ) ... but I just wanted to explain, so you don't think I'm a crazy person.... lmao...
cool 😎
Your breath of voice here .. the last stanza.. dicing death with violence.... what a intensely addictive and utterly salivating inducing, line.
captivating, original, unique and so refreshing in it's heft
..
Ty for sharing, S
🌹
cool 😎
Your breath of voice here .. the last stanza.. dicing death with violence.... what a intensely addictive and utterly salivating inducing, line.
captivating, original, unique and so refreshing in it's heft
..
Ty for sharing, S
🌹
26th Sep 2021 2:27am
