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This recipe yields a baker's dozen
i.
Lasting memory lives
in the song
of slapping dough
and the golden
curves
that rise
ii.
To prevent sticking
and ideas of bitterness —
grease the wheels,
encouraging
forward
p e r p e t u a l
motion
iii.
Those eyes glaze
skin prickles
in promised decadence
hand in hand
to stir
and whisk.
iv.
When it's the sound
of hooves,
the breadth
of insinuation boils
a. very. slow. boil.
v.
Nights ache,
roll[ing]
one
into
another.
vi.
Sieving time,
to soar of open air
as space
concentrates,
purifying every ingredient
incorporated into
hands that knew— exactly why.
vii.
Proof of
heat
×
§
×
cauterizes
viii.
He heard a noise
as thoughts scrape and
a certain strength
crystallizes
so sweet,
the taste.
ix.
Rose infused
Just the slightest tinge
Floral notes
mix among herbaceous hints
Transforming opinions
into beliefs
x.
Salt is key
in
making
true believers.
xi.
Stirring it up
crude or creative
with enough will
it's own beauty
is baked in.
xii.
I (k)needed
and quietly begged
The sun arose in fanfare,
illuminating fates ahead-
O'er such tender atmosphere
xiii.
There is never enough,
when gluttony is
'per instruction'
Written by
Bluevelvete
Published 6th Aug 2021
Author's Note
For Razzerleaf's 13 ways of looking at anything comp.
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/forum/competitions/read/11995/
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/forum/competitions/read/11995/
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Re. This recipe yields a baker's dozen
6th Aug 2021 8:28pm
Such a tasty treat!! I love how you've drizzled your words, well done my friend!
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Re: Re. This recipe yields a baker's dozen
7th Aug 2021 6:29am
Your yummy comments leave me utterly satiated!
😋
Much appreciated, Cait.
You're kind and I thank you for stopping by to read.
🌹-💙
-Blu
😋
Much appreciated, Cait.
You're kind and I thank you for stopping by to read.
🌹-💙
-Blu
Anonymous
- Edited 25th Oct 2022 6:45pm
6th Aug 2021 9:30pm
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Re: Re. This recipe yields a baker's dozen
7th Aug 2021 6:35am
I hope so!! This took me longer than expected to write so even without any prize or trophy, I am simple proud of the fact that I finished it with something half way intelligible... lol...
I really appreciate your kindness, the list add and the openness of your remarks.
Thanks, Tim
🌹 - 💙
B
I really appreciate your kindness, the list add and the openness of your remarks.
Thanks, Tim
🌹 - 💙
B
Re. This recipe yields a baker's dozen
6th Aug 2021 9:47pm
This is incredible! Stunned at the words, images, spacing, punctuation. It all comes together beautifully!
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Re: Re. This recipe yields a baker's dozen
7th Aug 2021 6:38am
Oh wow! Thank you, senid. That means a lot to me and I am so grateful for those thoughtful sentiments, your list add and the generosity of spirit, shown.
It's always a pleasure to see you on my page 🦋
🌹 - 💙
B
It's always a pleasure to see you on my page 🦋
🌹 - 💙
B
Re. This recipe yields a baker's dozen
6th Aug 2021 10:11pm
Ok beautiful I'm starving hungry now
Great piece, good luck in the competition
Love and light
Ron xx
Great piece, good luck in the competition
Love and light
Ron xx
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Re: Re. This recipe yields a baker's dozen
I hope you had your fill and were able to satisfy your hunger, my lovely friend 🙏🏻... haha 😂...
I loved your comments and I'm so grateful for your list add, the well wishes and your continued encouragements.
Ty Ty Ty
🙏🏻
🌹 - 💙
B
I loved your comments and I'm so grateful for your list add, the well wishes and your continued encouragements.
Ty Ty Ty
🙏🏻
🌹 - 💙
B
Re. This recipe yields a baker's dozen
The recipe for love. Keep on writing you strong beautiful smart sexy woman.
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Re: Re. This recipe yields a baker's dozen
7th Aug 2021 6:36am
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7th Aug 2021 5:22am
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Re: Re. This recipe yields a baker's dozen
7th Aug 2021 5:30am
Hey Wilber.... Long time no see!!
Your visit brings smiles and a joyful laugh.
Yep, my yummy little snacks... haha 😋
Thanks for the lovely sentiments and the kind list add, dear friend 🙏🏻
🌹 - 💙
(Don't be a stranger and I hope you and yours are doing well! 🌺)
Your visit brings smiles and a joyful laugh.
Yep, my yummy little snacks... haha 😋
Thanks for the lovely sentiments and the kind list add, dear friend 🙏🏻
🌹 - 💙
(Don't be a stranger and I hope you and yours are doing well! 🌺)
Anonymous
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7th Aug 2021 7:25am
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Re: Re. This recipe yields a baker's dozen
Thank you so much for reading and your extremely kind and astute remarks, Rian. I always truly enjoy your perspective. I am so grateful and I definitely giggled in 100% solidarity about every witch and poet knowing their brews, Yes, indeed!!. My heart soars that you derived a sense of some joy.... This comp piece was a bit of a challenge for me , so I am especially appreciative!!
All my warmest regards, dear poetess ✨ 💫 ✨
🌹 - 💙
B
All my warmest regards, dear poetess ✨ 💫 ✨
🌹 - 💙
B
Re. This recipe yields a baker's dozen
8th Aug 2021 00:44am
Interesting recipe, but then Momma always told me the way to a man's heart is through his stomach. Of course I'm sure it works on females too.
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Re: Re. This recipe yields a baker's dozen
12th Aug 2021 11:03am
Aww... lol.... I too have heard that same tidbit of good advice... lol... I bet it's true all around...
I thank you for reading and your extremely kind remarks, Tim. I always enjoy your thoughts and cherish your visits!!
Much appreciated, my friend
🌹 - B
I thank you for reading and your extremely kind remarks, Tim. I always enjoy your thoughts and cherish your visits!!
Much appreciated, my friend
🌹 - B
Re. This recipe yields a baker's dozen
9th Aug 2021 5:06am
Dear BV,
Sooooo where are my cookies?
13 steps. I still have no cookies!
Just funnin’ ya. This is excellent. Of course I wish you all the best in the comp and I still want COOKIES! Xx
H🌷
Sooooo where are my cookies?
13 steps. I still have no cookies!
Just funnin’ ya. This is excellent. Of course I wish you all the best in the comp and I still want COOKIES! Xx
H🌷
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Re: Re. This recipe yields a baker's dozen
Cookies or brownies or pie... maybe bread? I am a total bread-aholic. It's truly a vice as great as any other... I swear!!... lol... I like peanut butter cookies or chocolate chip walnut... Nom Nom Nom Nom!
I shall surprise you! 🍪🥛🍰🥧🍞... 😂
Thank you for reading and your comments made me hungry and full of late night (early morning) giggles!
I am sooo glad you enjoyed. I am /was nervous and questioning this piece ... I have zero chances in the comp because the talent there is in the total stratosphere..like seriously soooo soo good!!... I do feel like I already have a reward, in a sense, by the feeling of growth in my decision to enter the comp and the undertaking of writing this piece. For me, it was pretty difficult to put together, so my hope is that is a good sign of the process of myycontinued learning!... I can only hope I'm not 😳 embarrassing myself... haha...
I am so grateful for your visit and awesome comments... :)
Much love and oodles of appreciation - 💙
🌹 - B
I shall surprise you! 🍪🥛🍰🥧🍞... 😂
Thank you for reading and your comments made me hungry and full of late night (early morning) giggles!
I am sooo glad you enjoyed. I am /was nervous and questioning this piece ... I have zero chances in the comp because the talent there is in the total stratosphere..like seriously soooo soo good!!... I do feel like I already have a reward, in a sense, by the feeling of growth in my decision to enter the comp and the undertaking of writing this piece. For me, it was pretty difficult to put together, so my hope is that is a good sign of the process of myycontinued learning!... I can only hope I'm not 😳 embarrassing myself... haha...
I am so grateful for your visit and awesome comments... :)
Much love and oodles of appreciation - 💙
🌹 - B
Re: Re. This recipe yields a baker's dozen
10th Aug 2021 4:28pm
I totally get anxiety and doubt entering a competition but your reward is the entering of it.
You created an awesome poem from the prompt. You’ve poured your soul into its creativity. It had much meaning to and for you. And then to those who read and related to it.
Winner! 🏆
Now, when you get the one for the comp. mine goes on the shelf above that one. 😊
Xx
H🌷
PS I want chocolate chip cookies. No nuts please.
You created an awesome poem from the prompt. You’ve poured your soul into its creativity. It had much meaning to and for you. And then to those who read and related to it.
Winner! 🏆
Now, when you get the one for the comp. mine goes on the shelf above that one. 😊
Xx
H🌷
PS I want chocolate chip cookies. No nuts please.
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Re. This recipe yields a baker's dozen
12th Aug 2021 00:44am
This stirred the salt of my earth with a strong taste of what sensual love can be. The way you showed your edits reminded me of a book by Samuel Delany where he did similarly. You have his gift of incorporating that into your brilliant poem. And you made the baking metaphor your own with deft kneading of thoughts and imagery. There is a fire in your words that sparks my libido to realize its potential.
Xo
John
Xo
John
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Re: Re. This recipe yields a baker's dozen
I am wanting to do back flips, after reading your comments, John! .... I am so happy, grateful and excited by what you said here. This competition piece was difficult and completely out of my comfort zone. It took me longer to write and think about than what I am used to and that usually means that I'm completely overthinking things, which leads to a so/so kinda meh, end result.. (I've learned) I struggled with this and I still feel unsure about it.... but now my confidence has increased to a level that will allow me to at least leave it posted!!... I truly thank you for sharing your thoughts with me. I have such admiration for you.
All my warmest regards,
🌹 - 💙
xo
Susan
All my warmest regards,
🌹 - 💙
xo
Susan
Re. This recipe yields a baker's dozen
12th Aug 2021 5:55am
Wow, that was pretty amazing and unique. You really took the concept from the comp and applied it so creatively it's quite impressive.
Best of luck.
Best of luck.
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Re: Re. This recipe yields a baker's dozen
12th Aug 2021 6:11am
Thanks for reading and your lovely comments, Walter! It means a lot to me....
You're almost caught up, I think.... I am so so SO appreciative.
Ty Ty Ty
🙏🏻 - B
You're almost caught up, I think.... I am so so SO appreciative.
Ty Ty Ty
🙏🏻 - B