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Where It Breaks
Empty the rest of me
into the raging sea
where I can float away
until swallowed
by the ultimate wave
of forgiveness.
into the raging sea
where I can float away
until swallowed
by the ultimate wave
of forgiveness.
Published 4th Aug 2021
| Edited 6th Aug 2021
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4th Aug 2021 5:25am
Dear N,
Some days…some days this feels like the best way out. I do often wonder about forgiveness. I don’t recall ever forgiving myself for anything. Can an oceanic baptism handle the job? The photo is lovely and the poem is stellar and wonderfully introspective.
H🌷
Some days…some days this feels like the best way out. I do often wonder about forgiveness. I don’t recall ever forgiving myself for anything. Can an oceanic baptism handle the job? The photo is lovely and the poem is stellar and wonderfully introspective.
H🌷
11th Aug 2021 1:58pm
It’s a great combination of words and image, something that really embodies the meaning of depth.
27th Aug 2021 12:20pm
