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3rd Aug 2021 8:35pm
The lines could be read more than one way, giving it a double entendre: either as 'she invited me into her flat, then she was on her back etc' (if one does not use the Americanism 'apartment') or as 'she invited me to come inside her as she was flat on her back',
Yup. That's the poem. Kind of a subversion of the way dartford Paul writes (he never does it with erotica like this).
