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Messing around ... Honestly lol
God doesn't like me today
I'm hoping Jesus may
See I wanna go to heaven
But I like to play
So I know god turned on me way back in the day
I hold onto hope
With Jesus,
he really is no joke
See He was hung on a cross and lived to tell the story they say
I'm praying he can forgive my sins
But I don't pray
So someone ask for my soul to be saved
I think I said that wrong
Hell Jesus just might look away
W.w.j.d
I'm hoping Jesus may
See I wanna go to heaven
But I like to play
So I know god turned on me way back in the day
I hold onto hope
With Jesus,
he really is no joke
See He was hung on a cross and lived to tell the story they say
I'm praying he can forgive my sins
But I don't pray
So someone ask for my soul to be saved
I think I said that wrong
Hell Jesus just might look away
W.w.j.d
Published 25th Feb 2012
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25th Feb 2012 5:58am
nice GG
cant quite figure out if you are being some kind of serious underneath the humor.
either way i like it , it's pretty good and a different style to your norm.
i would probably change one word and that's
here;
So someone ask for my soul* to be saved
anyway, good to see you throwing down the words.
shine on !
ps, what would jesus do?
cant quite figure out if you are being some kind of serious underneath the humor.
either way i like it , it's pretty good and a different style to your norm.
i would probably change one word and that's
here;
So someone ask for my soul* to be saved
anyway, good to see you throwing down the words.
shine on !
ps, what would jesus do?
25th Feb 2012 6:00am
Haha you would get it .. Lmao.. Ok I'll fix that. Although I'm not so sure as to what part lol.
25th Feb 2012 6:01am
3rd May 2012 4:37am
God has only 3 answers,no,yes and later and they are way iood than your expectations.Gg lord is with u
3rd May 2012 4:54am
