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Messing around ... Honestly lol

God doesn't like me today�
I'm hoping Jesus may
See I wanna go to heaven�
But I like to play�
So I know god turned on me way back in the day
I hold onto hope�
With Jesus, �
he really is no joke�
See He was hung on a cross and lived to tell the story they say�
I'm praying he can forgive my sins�
But I don't pray�
So someone ask for my soul to be saved�
I think I said that wrong
Hell Jesus just might look away�
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W.w.j.d�

Written by Gg78

Published 25th Feb 2012

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W.w.j.d

lepperochan (CraicDealer)

25th Feb 2012 5:58am

nice GG

cant quite figure out if you are being some kind of serious underneath the humor.

either way i like it , it's pretty good and a different style to your norm.

i would probably change one word and that's
here;

So someone ask for my soul* to be saved

anyway, good to see you throwing down the words.

shine on !

ps, what would jesus do?