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YOU ARE DONE of all fun
Doc said
I rang up
sad again to say
you had a long one
big too
enjoyed life too did cum
so cummingly often
you did all you could
we all we could
to re-elongate you
sad
your are done
now never here
CUM
I rang up
sad again to say
you had a long one
big too
enjoyed life too did cum
so cummingly often
you did all you could
we all we could
to re-elongate you
sad
your are done
now never here
CUM
Published 30th Jul 2021
Author's Note
sadly no more of cumming
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Anonymous
30th Jul 2021 5:58am
Indeed, a sad day.
2 things I've been acutely aware of for many years. A day will come when I will never write any more poems, and never have any more sex.
Enjoyed!
Nice rhythms, and enjoyed the title as the first line. A delight!
2 things I've been acutely aware of for many years. A day will come when I will never write any more poems, and never have any more sex.
Enjoyed!
Nice rhythms, and enjoyed the title as the first line. A delight!
30th Jul 2021 4:51pm
