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A Psychoanalytical Knot
She liked them young
They liked her too
Like a Freudian fantasy
Being played out
Their mother figure &
The sons she never had
She kept in good shape
Denying herself
To fulfil their desires
Picking ripe fruit
In nature’s orchard hills
Payback’s a bastard
Her moon shining down
Ready for pups to howl to
And she starts them off
Showing how it’s done
Spells ricocheting
From tree to tree
Riding night’s breeze
Doing it easy
Solving the maze
A secret magic
Guiding their way
Like water in a valley
And I looked on
From behind my briar
Loved her all the more
Swore not to bite them
They liked her too
Like a Freudian fantasy
Being played out
Their mother figure &
The sons she never had
She kept in good shape
Denying herself
To fulfil their desires
Picking ripe fruit
In nature’s orchard hills
Payback’s a bastard
Her moon shining down
Ready for pups to howl to
And she starts them off
Showing how it’s done
Spells ricocheting
From tree to tree
Riding night’s breeze
Doing it easy
Solving the maze
A secret magic
Guiding their way
Like water in a valley
And I looked on
From behind my briar
Loved her all the more
Swore not to bite them
Published 28th Jul 2021
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Anonymous
28th Jul 2021 5:35am
Great topic...enjoyed...and, uh...interesting.
I was listening to Soundgarden's song, "Full on Kev's Mom," today, about a friend of a guy who takes up with the guy's MILF...
I like the topic, and the neo-classical / mythological treatment...so I'm wondering how to take that last stanza. Minotaur? I guess...I don't know...
Re-reading, is the sexual innuendo real? Or am I mis-reading?
idk...
Layers: milf / witchcraft / minotaur's maze...
I was listening to Soundgarden's song, "Full on Kev's Mom," today, about a friend of a guy who takes up with the guy's MILF...
I like the topic, and the neo-classical / mythological treatment...so I'm wondering how to take that last stanza. Minotaur? I guess...I don't know...
Re-reading, is the sexual innuendo real? Or am I mis-reading?
idk...
Layers: milf / witchcraft / minotaur's maze...
9th Aug 2021 2:40am
Gosh Mr! I like the tapestry of your thoughts & keen willingness to share. I too have been listening to said band this last week (go figure). On the topic of MILF's - I do admire beauty in all its lovely forms.
28th Jul 2021 9:08am
You're a master at metaphoric innuendo....It's a helluva tale you spin... absolute click bate with, the title... I mean, who could resist?? 🤷🏻♀️... I loved your imagery/descriptions... soooo good...
The line 'Payback's a bastard' made me giggle, because I love and cannot help) laughing at the completely inappropriate....
I think the last stanza compounds the reality of aging and the desire that still remains rampant...
I adore your thought provoking.
Even knowing that I could be way off, it's still aok with me... because the journey(s) you take me on always enrapture me and I find them uniquely, intriguing...
Thanks for that!
🌹 - 💙
B
The line 'Payback's a bastard' made me giggle, because I love and cannot help) laughing at the completely inappropriate....
I think the last stanza compounds the reality of aging and the desire that still remains rampant...
I adore your thought provoking.
Even knowing that I could be way off, it's still aok with me... because the journey(s) you take me on always enrapture me and I find them uniquely, intriguing...
Thanks for that!
🌹 - 💙
B
9th Aug 2021 2:51am
You are so welcome glorious reader. Thanks for the detailed feedback - I really appreciate that.
28th Jul 2021 9:34am
