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Echo Lake
I don’t want to
feel
all alone
anymore
I don’t want to
feel
all alone,
no
no.
Things are getting
lighter,
the sun
is rising,
My eyes
are
shining,
across, across,
the pond.
You’re free
to stay here
until the rain
stops,
of course
of course
of course.
I don’t want to
feel
all alone
anymore.
I dont want to
feel
all alone,
no
no.
I don’t think
I want it
to
feel
normal.
feel
all alone
anymore
I don’t want to
feel
all alone,
no
no.
Things are getting
lighter,
the sun
is rising,
My eyes
are
shining,
across, across,
the pond.
You’re free
to stay here
until the rain
stops,
of course
of course
of course.
I don’t want to
feel
all alone
anymore.
I dont want to
feel
all alone,
no
no.
I don’t think
I want it
to
feel
normal.
Published 27th Jul 2021
Author's Note
I don't think I want being alone to feel normal anymore.
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28th Jul 2021 7:02pm
Dear DB,
You share a personal feeling held by many to be sure. The repetition of “ I don’t want to
feel
all alone
anymore.” Drives your meaning for the reader and expresses those cyclical feelings that won’t seem to let us go and try something else to break it. I think this is a well crafted write. H🌷
You share a personal feeling held by many to be sure. The repetition of “ I don’t want to
feel
all alone
anymore.” Drives your meaning for the reader and expresses those cyclical feelings that won’t seem to let us go and try something else to break it. I think this is a well crafted write. H🌷
