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Universe
Human souls contain galaxies
with minds spanning universes
I’m not supposed to know this
or be so keenly aware of the abyss
Greater, stronger minds than mine
have known and felt and shattered
They never come back to earth
Always different and forever alone
with minds spanning universes
I’m not supposed to know this
or be so keenly aware of the abyss
Greater, stronger minds than mine
have known and felt and shattered
They never come back to earth
Always different and forever alone
Published 26th Jul 2021
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13th Aug 2021 2:18am
Dear I,
I like how well you’ve spanned the universe in this write. There are so many things we’ve yet to know while we inhabit this place it’s hard to take in. Your poem has set my mind to thinking about everything I can’t even grasp. Great piece. H🌷
I like how well you’ve spanned the universe in this write. There are so many things we’ve yet to know while we inhabit this place it’s hard to take in. Your poem has set my mind to thinking about everything I can’t even grasp. Great piece. H🌷
25th Jan 2022 7:08pm
Dude, some people admire younger authors if they grasp deep ideas, but I really envy and look up to poets who are past 30 and still have a good connection (let alone a great connection,) to feelings and universal thoughts like this. Some people just don't want to be that open hearted. Kudos.
