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Straight From the Furnace
Tempered steel
deep-forged in fire
is the strength
of my desire
Made with purpose
In your flames
And only by you
Is it tamed
Like molten metal
Shaped and strengthened
In your heat, treated
Molded
Lengthened
In passion, hardened
For pleasure's intent
In your love's oil,
first drenched
then quenched
Thank you, Crimsin for the inspiration in "Sated"
Published 26th Jul 2021
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26th Jul 2021 6:10am
Your poem will make some knights feel like dipping their hot swords into their ladies.
27th Jul 2021 00:39am
It is the ladies who lead those knights to have such desires, Brother Solomon
Very glad to hear from you
Very glad to hear from you
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26th Jul 2021 6:24am
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Anonymous
26th Jul 2021 12:52pm
To be transported to another era... magical! Bravo
27th Jul 2021 00:38am
And that is the magic of poetry
That readers are transported out of their normal realms for just a moment
So glad you enjoyed this
That readers are transported out of their normal realms for just a moment
So glad you enjoyed this
29th Jul 2021 11:54am
25th Aug 2021 5:52pm
