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Thunderous 2
A flash of lightning
Blood washed away from the scene
Darkness lit again
Blood washed away from the scene
Darkness lit again
Published 25th Jul 2021
Author's Note
By Pent
July 10th, 2021
July 10th, 2021
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Dear M,
Intense write in its brevity. You’ve managed to create an entire scene in seventeen syllables. Dark, yes and well done in the process. H🌷
Intense write in its brevity. You’ve managed to create an entire scene in seventeen syllables. Dark, yes and well done in the process. H🌷
25th Jul 2021 5:14am
The blood washed away from the scene, as lightning flashed, and lit the darkness.
Thank you H🌹
First line of a novel I think I would keep reading!
Thank you H🌹
First line of a novel I think I would keep reading!
