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Re: Re. Dating Details [ senryu humor ]
24th Jul 2021 10:04pm
Aww, Dear Keilani 🌸
You make a bard's heart sing and dance.
Thanks for being You and enjoying Me ⁓ Richard 🍃
You make a bard's heart sing and dance.
Thanks for being You and enjoying Me ⁓ Richard 🍃
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Re. Dating Details [senryu humor]
30th Jul 2021 1:44pm
Re: Re. Dating Details [senryu humor]
Mmmm, Kristina Dearest💥
Talk about imagery … yours "definitely" paints a stimulating picture. 😋
I, too, think that is a rather aptly befitting caricature … I'm pleased you approve and agree.
Thank you, Sweetness! ⁓ Richard 🍃
Talk about imagery … yours "definitely" paints a stimulating picture. 😋
I, too, think that is a rather aptly befitting caricature … I'm pleased you approve and agree.
Thank you, Sweetness! ⁓ Richard 🍃
Re. Dating Details [senryu humor]
15th Dec 2021 9:33pm
Re: Re. Dating Details [senryu humor]
16th Dec 2021 00:35am
Re. Dating Details [senryu humor]
12th Apr 2022 6:42am
Hmm. Well, I once met a young man who didn't know what a quarter of something meant. Shall we say that's his fault, or someone else's, or both, or shall we say he just needed different language, as he did know what "a fourth" of something meant? And I am a somewhat literate person. But due to certain circumstances, I got my first real job in many years a little over a year ago, working in a warehouse. And I work my hardest at that job. It's a physical job, and I am now stronger, physically, than I ever was. And everyone says I'm the hardest worker there. And I know what "infrequent" means. Maybe mine is a rare case. Oh, well.
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Re. Dating Details [senryu humor]
12th Apr 2022 7:49am
Well, it can be said that one who knows multiple ways to say things, at multiple levels, has everything, in all levels of brusqueness and delicacy, to draw on, and thus, has all those levels in his spirit. But one who only knows what a fourth of something means, and not what a quarter of something means, also has those levels. They may lie dormant in some people. But you have to reach, whispering, into their spirits, not laugh at them with a hammer, to bring it out.
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Re. Dating Details [senryu humor]
12th Apr 2022 7:57am
But you are a teacher. And you employ the laughing hammer here. Maybe there is a way to reach students with a laughing hammer rather than a spirit that whispers into the soul. And many subjects might be best taught with a hammer. But you are a teacher of poetry. But you are only a fixture in your students' outer worlds. Or can you really whisper into their hearts? Mm. If you can't whisper, which most can't, including me, though I was able to live by my whisper for many years, so maybe I can -- maybe you need the hammer.
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Re. Dating Details [senryu humor]
12th Apr 2022 8:04am
And I have never been proud of living by my whisper. Maybe that was the trick. One has to have no trace of pride in one's operation. One must be humble, and ask nothing but rice and beans and coffee or tea of the universe, and an occasional bit of wine is all right.
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Re. Dating Details [senryu humor]
12th Apr 2022 8:09am
You can feel the pull of the shadow, I know it. But you are bravely fighting every day. I have begun to feel again that the life is not worth this fight. How have you continued fighting so long? Ah, I know well enough how now. You Mithraic warrior, you. We fight back so much pain.
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Re. Dating Details [senryu humor]
12th Apr 2022 8:12am
And we have been silent for long years. We were younger in those years.
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