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reflections from the other side of the looking glass
I see a semblance of—
after searching,
staring down that rabbit hole
finally noticing small
tell-tale signs
flashes of memories
imbued with peculiarity;
tinkling whispers of youth
where joy is carved
permanence
highlights of decades flown
dance upon each line,
freckles dazzle
born of backwards sunlight
and dripping grains of sand
textures varying
from abstract art
to the smooth design
of a bygone era,
palpable in speckled
almost unrecognizable remnants
from inside to the out,
madness of time
holds its own incessant
tick tock
as the pendulum swings
forth and back
without end
surrender of the chase
is truth in reconciling;
rushing wishes
only to grasp at blinks
as the white rabbit
always makes swift getaway
slipping back through
the looking glass
mirroring reflections
of space and time
in surrealistic
tandem haunts
leaving a
reminder:
That wishes and dreams
can go a long long way...
Written by
Bluevelvete
Published 23rd Jul 2021
Author's Note
©Blu2021
Dreamlike musings of adult Alice....
👑♥️🐰 🕳 🎩
Dreamlike musings of adult Alice....
👑♥️🐰 🕳 🎩
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Re. reflections from the other side of the looking glass
23rd Jul 2021 11:31pm
Awesome absolutely great write, dreams can carry you along way. My dreams and wishes are mainly all I have left
Beautiful piece gorgeous
Love and light
Ron x
Beautiful piece gorgeous
Love and light
Ron x
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Re: Re. reflections from the other side of the looking glass
24th Jul 2021 00:33am
Don't ever sell yourself short, my lovely friend. You have a ton to offer.... your physical restrictions aren't the whole of your delightful being. You, are awesome in soooo many ways... Glad you enjoyed reading and found something that resonated... I adore your thoughtful remarks, your valuable insights and the inspiration I derive from it all, combined.
Much love and respect from across the pond ✨
🌹 - B
Much love and respect from across the pond ✨
🌹 - B
Re. reflections from the other side of the looking glass
23rd Jul 2021 11:40pm
Re: Re. reflections from the other side of the looking glass
You're a lovely source of warmth, C.
I wholly appreciate you! Thank you for sharing your thoughts, the generous nature of your visits, (always) ... and the kindness of your list add.... I don't take it lightly and I'm sincerely grateful - 💙
🌹 - B
I wholly appreciate you! Thank you for sharing your thoughts, the generous nature of your visits, (always) ... and the kindness of your list add.... I don't take it lightly and I'm sincerely grateful - 💙
🌹 - B
Re. reflections from the other side of the looking glass
24th Jul 2021 00:30am
I love how you spilled this stimulating piece of spoken words made from a dream for dreams are made to come true yet most of us would sometimes settle for less than what we deserve yet forgetting about the real beauty of dreams as you say sometimes going down that rabbit hole and become lost within the turmoil and confusion even misconception of what it means to love unconditionally and dream of finding that one relationship that has all the makings of being that one dream that will last a lifetime of happiness 🎆🙏😎👊
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Re: Re. reflections from the other side of the looking glass
It's within those lost moments that we can sometimes find the most clarity.... ✨
Thank you for sharing your amazingly insightful and inspiring thoughts, Stoney. I'm always left with a strong sense of purpose, love and hope whenever I read your comments; I adore that, so! It's truly nice having you visit tonight.... I hope you are doing well.
I appreciate you reading and taking the time.
Much love and respect, dear poet 🙏🏻
🌹 - 💙
B
Thank you for sharing your amazingly insightful and inspiring thoughts, Stoney. I'm always left with a strong sense of purpose, love and hope whenever I read your comments; I adore that, so! It's truly nice having you visit tonight.... I hope you are doing well.
I appreciate you reading and taking the time.
Much love and respect, dear poet 🙏🏻
🌹 - 💙
B
Re: Re. reflections from the other side of the looking glass
30th Jul 2021 7:02pm
I am glad you enjoyed my words I still believe in encouragement and support that I have instilled in you for it is definitely necessary to leave a message from the depth of the heart and soul that shall live forever live on the spiritual soul 😇😁 for we all have a purpose in this cycle known as life 😎🙅
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Re. reflections from the other side of the looking glass
24th Jul 2021 1:47am
Let us have a tea party with crumpets, strawberry jam, blueberry scones, with only the most proper English teas served in only the most proper English tea cups. We can each dress as our favorite character from Alice in Wonderland. We can laugh and chat between sips of tea and mouse nibbles of our biscuits. It would all be so perfectly splendid.
hugs/luv's
buddhakitty.
hugs/luv's
buddhakitty.
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Re: Re. reflections from the other side of the looking glass
lmao.... 😂
Ohh how I fantasize! ....
I am beaming from your comments and sooo very wanting THIS scene to play out... Oh the awesome visual that I have! Are you the Mad Hatter to my adult Alice?!?... Oh hell yeah!! ☑ ☑ ☑ .... lol...
Perfectly and amazingly splendid, indeed... Although I'm probably more prone to show up as the Cheshire cat!! 🙀 😁 🐾
haha.....
Such killer comments, bk!
returned xoxo's
-💙
B
Ohh how I fantasize! ....
I am beaming from your comments and sooo very wanting THIS scene to play out... Oh the awesome visual that I have! Are you the Mad Hatter to my adult Alice?!?... Oh hell yeah!! ☑ ☑ ☑ .... lol...
Perfectly and amazingly splendid, indeed... Although I'm probably more prone to show up as the Cheshire cat!! 🙀 😁 🐾
haha.....
Such killer comments, bk!
returned xoxo's
-💙
B
Re: Re. reflections from the other side of the looking glass
24th Jul 2021 2:21pm
My beautiful Blue. I am already quite mad so it would only be fitting I would be the Mad Hatter.
hugs/luv's
buddhakitty in Wonderland.
hugs/luv's
buddhakitty in Wonderland.
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Re. reflections from the other side of the looking glass
24th Jul 2021 1:54am
OMG❣OMG❣OMG❣🌹 Dear, Lady Blue, this brilliant piece is written with such breathtaking erudition and velvety smooth flow. The second stanza embraced me, coaxing me down the rabbit hole emerging into a paradise of memories. Can't pinpoint why, but I love this line, "flashes of memories
imbued with peculiarity;"
Which is odd because "peculiar," in all its forms, is one of my most difficult words, in English, to pronounce 🤪🥴
Bravissima, mi conejita guapita🐻💞🐰
imbued with peculiarity;"
Which is odd because "peculiar," in all its forms, is one of my most difficult words, in English, to pronounce 🤪🥴
Bravissima, mi conejita guapita🐻💞🐰
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¡Todas mis gracias, mi Bobby Oso!
You're so incredibly awesome at leaving me so full of motivation and a rejuvenated spirit!! I appreciate that ability you have beyond words!! Lol... I wholeheartedly relate to the (lack of ability at the) pronunciation of peculiar... especially when it's peculiarity... YIKES! No spoken word on this one!! It's difficult for me too... Embarrassingly 😳 so! Hahaha... Ohh we kindred spirits...I am so grateful for your thoughtful comments, and the generosity of your insights....
It's more than a pleasure to see you 🦋
🌹 - 💙
xo
🐰🐻🐰🐻🐰
-B
You're so incredibly awesome at leaving me so full of motivation and a rejuvenated spirit!! I appreciate that ability you have beyond words!! Lol... I wholeheartedly relate to the (lack of ability at the) pronunciation of peculiar... especially when it's peculiarity... YIKES! No spoken word on this one!! It's difficult for me too... Embarrassingly 😳 so! Hahaha... Ohh we kindred spirits...I am so grateful for your thoughtful comments, and the generosity of your insights....
It's more than a pleasure to see you 🦋
🌹 - 💙
xo
🐰🐻🐰🐻🐰
-B
Re. reflections from the other side of the looking glass
Anonymous
24th Jul 2021 2:38am
Hey Blue……outstanding ink……we ourselves different when we look within our soul……life seems like a film…….never ending movie we feel over and over……just my take Lol! Your talent is grand…….purple luv & hugs xo :)
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Re: Re. reflections from the other side of the looking glass
I appreciate your thoughts, fg!
It's always hardest to look within... At least, in my experiences.... Sometimes it's cleansing other times it takes awhile to reconcile....
Your visits always leave me in smiles, my lovely purple poetess... Thank you so much for sharing with me.
All my warmest gratitude.
🌹-💜
xoxo
B
It's always hardest to look within... At least, in my experiences.... Sometimes it's cleansing other times it takes awhile to reconcile....
Your visits always leave me in smiles, my lovely purple poetess... Thank you so much for sharing with me.
All my warmest gratitude.
🌹-💜
xoxo
B
Re. reflections from the other side of the looking glass
24th Jul 2021 4:13am
Dreams can make you happy. I wish you nothing but happiness. Keep on writing you strong beautiful smart sexy woman.
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24th Jul 2021 7:24am
Awww, wow! That's incredibly kind, Francisco. Thank you very much, I really appreciate that sentiment, as well as your visit.
🌹-B
🌹-B
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Re: Re. reflections from the other side of the looking glass
25th Jul 2021 8:05am
Thanks for reading, Tim
I appreciate your thoughtful comments, the list add and all your consideration.
I hope you're feeling better and alls well in the noggin!
🌹 - 💙
xo
B
I appreciate your thoughtful comments, the list add and all your consideration.
I hope you're feeling better and alls well in the noggin!
🌹 - 💙
xo
B
Re. reflections from the other side of the looking glass
Dear BV,
Can I be the queen of hearts? Pleeeeeeeaaaaasssssseeee?
I won’t cut off anyone’s head. I promise. Well, I won’t cut off too many peoples heads. I sort of promise. Nope. I’m cutting off heads. Forget it.
“ surrender of the chase” when I read this line it struck me how much I’m desperately trying to hang on to the last vestiges of youth. Physically. It’s hopeless and not working but I’ve got bloody fingernails in the attempt.
This is a gorgeous write in reflection and appreciation for what stares back in the glass. There’s always a lot more good than bad once I’ve taken inventory and give thanks for that and the memories I claim for the fun and development of who I am now. Aging is odd and hard but I wouldn’t want to be in my 20’s again for a single farthing. Great piece as per my friend. H🌷
Can I be the queen of hearts? Pleeeeeeeaaaaasssssseeee?
I won’t cut off anyone’s head. I promise. Well, I won’t cut off too many peoples heads. I sort of promise. Nope. I’m cutting off heads. Forget it.
“ surrender of the chase” when I read this line it struck me how much I’m desperately trying to hang on to the last vestiges of youth. Physically. It’s hopeless and not working but I’ve got bloody fingernails in the attempt.
This is a gorgeous write in reflection and appreciation for what stares back in the glass. There’s always a lot more good than bad once I’ve taken inventory and give thanks for that and the memories I claim for the fun and development of who I am now. Aging is odd and hard but I wouldn’t want to be in my 20’s again for a single farthing. Great piece as per my friend. H🌷
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Re: Re. reflections from the other side of the looking glass
25th Jul 2021 8:14am
I ABSOLUTELY NEED your no nonsense.. sense, as the Queen Of Hearts❤️ 👑 cuz there's definitely heads that need rolling!! 🤣😂🤣
I wholeheartedly agree! I would still like the ability for my body to bounce back faster, to return. Ohhh yeah!! Being in my late 40's, it's definitely noticeable that it's waning... but I too, would never want to go back to my 20's.. NO EFFING WAY. I appreciate my age, I just do not appreciative the effects of gravity.
Hahaha!
I am so grateful for your thoughtful reflections, remarks, humor etc.... I feel how lucky I am, when I read your uniquely amazing feedback.
Thank you, Honoria - 💙
Much love,
🌹 - B
I wholeheartedly agree! I would still like the ability for my body to bounce back faster, to return. Ohhh yeah!! Being in my late 40's, it's definitely noticeable that it's waning... but I too, would never want to go back to my 20's.. NO EFFING WAY. I appreciate my age, I just do not appreciative the effects of gravity.
Hahaha!
I am so grateful for your thoughtful reflections, remarks, humor etc.... I feel how lucky I am, when I read your uniquely amazing feedback.
Thank you, Honoria - 💙
Much love,
🌹 - B
Re. reflections from the other side of the looking glass
25th Jul 2021 1:02pm
"born of backwards sunlight"
I think this was my favorite line. Just conjuring the idea of a different physics, in a prolific expansion of expression. This piece reminds me of the idea of our memories being configurations in states of constant reconfiguration, or so we are told... but... deep down, I think, we know the truth... We sense it in a way that cannot be denied. What we were told is a lie. Perception is reality, or the capacity to be reality. There is a world outside of our world, where all things are possible, in the corner of the eye, right there, within our reach, and yet...
The waves of time, as experienced in the perceptual concentrations that are imposed upon us, have sought to beat us into submission, in order to make us no longer ourselves.
Blu, this piece is so fucking exquisite, on so many levels.
(I was going to tell a story about a presentation I gave called "Through the Looking Glass: An examination of HPPD... Perhaps later... I very much appreciate what you have done with this concept.)
I think this was my favorite line. Just conjuring the idea of a different physics, in a prolific expansion of expression. This piece reminds me of the idea of our memories being configurations in states of constant reconfiguration, or so we are told... but... deep down, I think, we know the truth... We sense it in a way that cannot be denied. What we were told is a lie. Perception is reality, or the capacity to be reality. There is a world outside of our world, where all things are possible, in the corner of the eye, right there, within our reach, and yet...
The waves of time, as experienced in the perceptual concentrations that are imposed upon us, have sought to beat us into submission, in order to make us no longer ourselves.
Blu, this piece is so fucking exquisite, on so many levels.
(I was going to tell a story about a presentation I gave called "Through the Looking Glass: An examination of HPPD... Perhaps later... I very much appreciate what you have done with this concept.)
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Ohh my!!!
Your tremendously amazing comments are so uplifting and well articulated of deep insight.
I wasn't pulling from a particular statement or specifically from a staunch concept, itself. More from the overt randomness that life itself serves up sometimes, combined with the surrealism that I always felt accompanied the stories of Alice's Adventures In Wonderland and Through The Looking Glass..... Hence, some of the imagery and word phrasing...
Yes,Yes!! Just balancing, a teeter within the periphery of vision.... I like that notion, very much!
I am so grateful for your mind and the generous nature of your soulfulness.
Glad you are here, that you enjoyed and can feel the kinship, Cipher!
That's truly awesome!!
Thank you, thank you!!
Much love,
🌹 - B
Your tremendously amazing comments are so uplifting and well articulated of deep insight.
I wasn't pulling from a particular statement or specifically from a staunch concept, itself. More from the overt randomness that life itself serves up sometimes, combined with the surrealism that I always felt accompanied the stories of Alice's Adventures In Wonderland and Through The Looking Glass..... Hence, some of the imagery and word phrasing...
Yes,Yes!! Just balancing, a teeter within the periphery of vision.... I like that notion, very much!
I am so grateful for your mind and the generous nature of your soulfulness.
Glad you are here, that you enjoyed and can feel the kinship, Cipher!
That's truly awesome!!
Thank you, thank you!!
Much love,
🌹 - B
Re. reflections from the other side of the looking glass
This is really beautiful, the white rabbit representing magic and illusion and things which escape and the rabbit hole. Rabbits are my favorite animal too, I just wrote a poem about our resident wild bunny in the yard :)
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Re: Re. reflections from the other side of the looking glass
28th Jul 2021 8:55am
Thanks, PR!!
I am partial to the rabbits, 🐰 that's for sure. Glad you enjoyed my little attempt....Ohh I'll have to read your poem, if you've published it!!.
Thank you for visiting, the list add and taking the time to leave me your thoughts... I really do appreciate it!
🌹 - 💙
B
I am partial to the rabbits, 🐰 that's for sure. Glad you enjoyed my little attempt....Ohh I'll have to read your poem, if you've published it!!.
Thank you for visiting, the list add and taking the time to leave me your thoughts... I really do appreciate it!
🌹 - 💙
B
Re. reflections from the other side of the looking glass
30th Jul 2021 6:27am
You brought Alice into adulthood and took her on a cosmic journey into the reflections of time and space. Love the scintillating words you wove into a vision of transcendence. There is magic here abounding. And I was privileged to behold the enchantment you painted into a vision blessed.
XoXo
John
XoXo
John
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Re: Re. reflections from the other side of the looking glass
30th Jul 2021 7:26am
Lovely comments, indeed.... My dear.
You're welcomed to take a gander through my looking glass, anytime!! ☺ ☺ ☺ ☺
Your motivation is truly a joy to feel. Thank you, thank, thank you!!
🌹 - 💙
Susan
You're welcomed to take a gander through my looking glass, anytime!! ☺ ☺ ☺ ☺
Your motivation is truly a joy to feel. Thank you, thank, thank you!!
🌹 - 💙
Susan
Re. reflections from the other side of the looking glass
10th Aug 2021 00:01am
I caught something that maybe it's just my imagination or perhaps you did on purpose, as the usual saying is "back and forth" yet you wrote it as "forth and back" as if looking through the mirror and the reflection is backwards. (IDK)
These reflective pieces on aging offer so much, it's heart tugging and insightful, sharing bits of wisdom learned and earned over time.
Wonderful work.
These reflective pieces on aging offer so much, it's heart tugging and insightful, sharing bits of wisdom learned and earned over time.
Wonderful work.
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Re. reflections from the other side of the looking glass
10th Aug 2021 00:08am
You nailed it, Walter!
Completely added that intentionally to elicit a mirroring effect and I also added "backwards sunlight" and "dripping grains of sand"... to add a surrealistic aspect...
You're very astute, my friend 🙏🏻
I am definitely all smiles that you enjoyed and found my little write entertaining.
I thank you so much!
🌹 - B
Completely added that intentionally to elicit a mirroring effect and I also added "backwards sunlight" and "dripping grains of sand"... to add a surrealistic aspect...
You're very astute, my friend 🙏🏻
I am definitely all smiles that you enjoyed and found my little write entertaining.
I thank you so much!
🌹 - B