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I love the feeling
Of not having to go to work tomorrow,
Physical exhaustion,
Contribution, and
A long shower.
She loves the feeling
Of no one else is up and about yet,
Half an hour with a coffee,
A breakfast fire, and
Birds waking.
We love how it feels
To prepare each other's morning brew,
Pick out this year's flowers,
Tend sore muscles, and
Share long drives.
.
I love it when
I'm kissed just for coming home,
The news, and dinner mingle,
We've shared our day, and
There's a quiet, late hour.
She loves it when
The tub is filled with steamy water,
Her phone let's her hear, "Hi Nanny!", and
She's doing crafts, with
Kids partaking.
We love it when
Hugging for warmth, or support,
Challenges are overcome,
Sharing solitude, or laughter, and
Our friendship thrives
Of not having to go to work tomorrow,
Physical exhaustion,
Contribution, and
A long shower.
She loves the feeling
Of no one else is up and about yet,
Half an hour with a coffee,
A breakfast fire, and
Birds waking.
We love how it feels
To prepare each other's morning brew,
Pick out this year's flowers,
Tend sore muscles, and
Share long drives.
.
I love it when
I'm kissed just for coming home,
The news, and dinner mingle,
We've shared our day, and
There's a quiet, late hour.
She loves it when
The tub is filled with steamy water,
Her phone let's her hear, "Hi Nanny!", and
She's doing crafts, with
Kids partaking.
We love it when
Hugging for warmth, or support,
Challenges are overcome,
Sharing solitude, or laughter, and
Our friendship thrives
Published 23rd Jul 2021
Author's Note
By Pent
July 23rd, 2021
I was out on the balcony before dinner, when I took a moment to enjoy the feeling of not working the next day. She joined me, so I asked her what she loved feeling.
July 23rd, 2021
I was out on the balcony before dinner, when I took a moment to enjoy the feeling of not working the next day. She joined me, so I asked her what she loved feeling.
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Anonymous
23rd Jul 2021 6:50am
A beautiful moment...
Veterans of the rat-race, such as myself, are deeply moved by this.
Veterans of the rat-race, such as myself, are deeply moved by this.
23rd Jul 2021 12:44pm
Thanks Mark,
That's one of the rewarding things about poetry: writing something people can relate to, then knowing you're not the only one.
That's one of the rewarding things about poetry: writing something people can relate to, then knowing you're not the only one.
24th Jul 2021 8:59am
24th Jul 2021 2:53pm
