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Sex
the critic
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the critic
said she'd found me
a disappointing lover
I said I can find
my own, thanks
Written by
dartford
(Paul S...)
Published
20th Jul 2021
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Re. the critic
Cipher_O
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22nd Jul 2021 5:18am
Very cool.
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