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WHEN THE COMMITMENT IS REAL
When do you know what you have is special and unique and beautiful, is when we can rediscover who and what we have in our lives, for there's no denying the depth of the heart nor the love. For you can see through the illuminations of the mere darkness, seen through open eyes not through eyes close to the warmth of loving arms. When do you know what they say is true from the heart and soul, cause you feel it emotionally and physically as it pours through your own majestic soul, like liquid strings of gold woven into a tapestry of body and soul. Cause when it comes with no strings attach to the very existences, that you are never alone in the deepness of the storms of life. For they are more than a friend more than a woman who withstood the very test of time, as they stood by you when everyone counted you out for they saw within you that love and honor and devotion and respect with understanding. As you slowly show your subconsciousness and awareness and awakening of your mind and heart and soul. As they saw you metamorphosis into something, so beautiful between the lines of heaven and earth as you grew with positivity and patience and understanding to see not the man you are but the subconscious man you have now become through your struggles.
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