catching

liked it, even though, to be honest, those three dots at the end ruin the whole structure of the poem. you told me, you were trying to get rid of them: try harder, maybe? :) overall, great poem. i liked these lines: Ggod not in the mirror or the sky..
but at the center of existence..
center of the chest/head..
nail-bomb/savior..

i believe it myself, that God isn't some myth which lives in a sky and writes our destinies in his golden book. people tend to think so, as there's always someone else to be blamed for their own mistakes. "It isn't your fault"
"there's nothing to fear"
fuck off..
hahaha :) well done

yes. well I will try in this note back to you not to use the two dots. I get into a habit and just stick with it. I do realize it annoys people now. you weren't the first to bring it up. it's very difficult even in this note not to do it. but you are right they are unnecessary. I look at them as just the end of a sentence. you look it like other probably will like a long pause. which does ruin the flow.

center of head and chest. yes this was written at a time when I still believed I was Ggod. there were some lyrics from a song I like and they said "god is in the mirror not hiding in the sky" made me think. once in the nut house I told two nurses that I thought I was Ggod. they didn't look at me like I was crazy. actually one of them said "you are, we all are, just pieces of the greater whole". a lot of theories out there and I take them all into consideration.

hehe I liked ending this with "fuck off" glad you dig it hun.