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completely pleased

her ribbons of red
are mesmerizing hypnotizing
there simple touch across my skin
sends flames of fire consuming me
with there erotic prowess
the skill that my lover has
soft sweet and ruff
when desire has its need
she teases with her breast
her nipples also caress
to amplify my deepening need
the warmth the depth
as she attempts to devour
drawing me deeper passionately
over whelming every inch of me
then she whispers take me
there was no mistaking her need
so I penetrated her properly
till we were completely pleased
Written by 4Her411
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