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drawn to you
drawn to you
beyond your beauty
in your eyes a love I seen
a loving heart meant for me
the depth and breast
that would bind us into eternity
now our years are thirty plus more
your more beautiful than ever before
such reaching beyond reality
it's like a brand new start
your fantasies is pure art
the length you will go to please
in my wildest of dreams
did I think how erotic you could be
you truly are beyond everything
beyond your beauty
beyond your beauty
in your eyes a love I seen
a loving heart meant for me
the depth and breast
that would bind us into eternity
now our years are thirty plus more
your more beautiful than ever before
such reaching beyond reality
it's like a brand new start
your fantasies is pure art
the length you will go to please
in my wildest of dreams
did I think how erotic you could be
you truly are beyond everything
beyond your beauty
Published 2nd Jul 2021
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2nd Jul 2021 1:29am
What a beautiful whisper my poet, I hope your beloved knows just how blessed she is for such a dedicated admiration
2nd Jul 2021 1:36am
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2nd Jul 2021 4:14am
2nd Jul 2021 4:23pm
a typo perhaps ?
in your eyes a love I seen
————
in your eyes a love I’ve seen ?
in your eyes a love I see ?
in your eyes a love I seen
————
in your eyes a love I’ve seen ?
in your eyes a love I see ?
2nd Jul 2021 6:43pm
No typo it was the way it was meant to be. It's one of those thing I can't explain. It has to do with present and past tense that's the best I can do. Thank you I do have a lot of typos in my writing
