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Eternity
Think not of eternity as forever
unlimited amounts of tomorrow
Inhabit the seconds of present
the best ones can last millennia
Breaths before first kisses
ultimate highs of intimate pleasure
The moments after child’s birth
a soul ascendant after death
We strive in vain for immortality
unknown expanses of future
Better to consider the eternity
of time we inhabit right now.
unlimited amounts of tomorrow
Inhabit the seconds of present
the best ones can last millennia
Breaths before first kisses
ultimate highs of intimate pleasure
The moments after child’s birth
a soul ascendant after death
We strive in vain for immortality
unknown expanses of future
Better to consider the eternity
of time we inhabit right now.
Published 20th Jun 2021
Author's Note
Eternity doesn't necessarily mean forever in time, for a second can last an eternity.
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20th Jun 2021 8:44pm
A philosophical hue here that can be seen in many wise people in history. Nicely done!!
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4th Jul 2021 11:03am
This was packed with things to ponder. So easy to miss the moments that can be an eternity in our lives. Also, good advice in that last line. "Better to consider the eternity of time we inhabit right now."
