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...A Voice...
A voice
is…
The vibration of the vocal chords
implying music
or…
Music implies a voice...
an inverse
like the last becoming the first
or…
the first becoming the last
like poetry in motion
or…
motion in poetry
a verse
For…
Your -
Voice
That sweeps over the surface of my heart & soul like the wings of angels
or…
Angels of wings
When angels appear in our Earth bound dwellings
garnering second looks like second sight
or…
Second thoughts
like...
is twilight night
or…
night twilight
conundrums spiraling around
enigmas...
all to the sound
of…
Your voice
Published 17th Jun 2021
Author's Note
Well... My life is strange and I am strange. :)))))
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17th Jun 2021 1:44pm
Dear CO,
I like how you’ve flip flopped opposites throughout the poem. For me it shows how the world isn’t black and white but 50 (and more) shades of grey.
If you think you’re life is strange…you’re not alone! I think this is a lovely poem. H🌷
I like how you’ve flip flopped opposites throughout the poem. For me it shows how the world isn’t black and white but 50 (and more) shades of grey.
If you think you’re life is strange…you’re not alone! I think this is a lovely poem. H🌷
18th Jun 2021 9:50am
Big Smile, for shore, H. The structural components shorely makes for complex structures that can be turned to beauty only in our perceptions.
And I would say that certain inputs, or perhaps all inputs, but some more impactful than others, influence how we perceive things.
Some see this; some see that; some see this or that; some see this & that... and it is, of course, beautiful...
I have a great affinity and appreciation for your comment, my friend.
And I would say that certain inputs, or perhaps all inputs, but some more impactful than others, influence how we perceive things.
Some see this; some see that; some see this or that; some see this & that... and it is, of course, beautiful...
I have a great affinity and appreciation for your comment, my friend.
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17th Jun 2021 2:56pm
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18th Jun 2021 9:52am
I greatly appreciate that, my friend. Many thanks.
(As a the thought provoking thinker that I perceive you to be, this perspective is highly meaningful to me.)
(As a the thought provoking thinker that I perceive you to be, this perspective is highly meaningful to me.)
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17th Jun 2021 3:15pm
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18th Jun 2021 9:53am
I love the way you have expressed these sentiments, Tim. Very cool and interesting. I thank you greatly for these things.
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- Edited 23rd Jun 2021 2:28am
17th Jun 2021 4:58pm
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18th Jun 2021 9:55am
Thank you, G. I truly appreciate your perspective on all matters. I am edified and enlightened in your midst. I very humbly extend my deepest gratitude.
