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When you look into my eyes what do you see?
Do you see everything that is wrong with me?
Do you see the pain i live everyday?
Do you see the game for which i can't get away?
Do you see the tears i cry every single night?
Do you see the fear i have that i will never win this fight?
When you look into my eyes what do you see?
Do you see that i'm imprisoned here and will never be free?
Do you see that i have lost all control?
Do you see the demons that torture my soal?
Do you see lost dreams that will never be complete?
Do you see good people that i will never meet?
When you look into my eyes what do you see?
Do you see if something better for me?
Do you see all of the hurtful lies?
Do you see the people i have made cry?
Do you see the many hearts i will break?
Do you see all my many many mistakes?
Do you see the shame that weighs on my soal?
Do you see that i am a real asshole?
Do you see everything that is wrong with me?
Do you see the pain i live everyday?
Do you see the game for which i can't get away?
Do you see the tears i cry every single night?
Do you see the fear i have that i will never win this fight?
When you look into my eyes what do you see?
Do you see that i'm imprisoned here and will never be free?
Do you see that i have lost all control?
Do you see the demons that torture my soal?
Do you see lost dreams that will never be complete?
Do you see good people that i will never meet?
When you look into my eyes what do you see?
Do you see if something better for me?
Do you see all of the hurtful lies?
Do you see the people i have made cry?
Do you see the many hearts i will break?
Do you see all my many many mistakes?
Do you see the shame that weighs on my soal?
Do you see that i am a real asshole?
Published 22nd Feb 2012
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22nd Feb 2012 1:50am
Love the rhyme scheme and the concept! I like how the first two stanzas look at life in the present and the last stanza looks toward the future and past. I also like the title. It really draws the reader in.
And just because you encourage "honest critique", "soal" in the second to last line should be "soul" :)
And just because you encourage "honest critique", "soal" in the second to last line should be "soul" :)
22nd Feb 2012 7:00pm
24th Feb 2012 5:27am
I have a poem that begins with the exact same line as yours, I wonder what that says about truth.
Do eyes symbolize truth to us?
How much can our eyes say about us?
Do eyes symbolize truth to us?
How much can our eyes say about us?
29th Feb 2012 4:11am
This i can see you put alot of your heart into and i was really able to see or get my own perspective on things!
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10th Feb 2014 9:41pm
I c see sea icy a lot in eyes what is dark is light and light is dark not in necessarily a good/bad dark/light colored/collard/coloured/ co-lured way/weigh...
