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anticlimactic
We started off craving,
inhaling love daily
unfiltered and giddy;
romantically drenched.
Somewhere soon after
prematurely neutral,
though both very hungry
we’re bored with the food.
inhaling love daily
unfiltered and giddy;
romantically drenched.
Somewhere soon after
prematurely neutral,
though both very hungry
we’re bored with the food.
Author's Note
sometimes happens that nothing really happens
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Re. anticlimactic
14th Jun 2021 9:16pm
Perhaps it's true, variety is the spice of life. Great write. Hugs and [eace, oral
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14th Jun 2021 10:31pm
thank you, oral. At least some spice, right? Boredom is intolerable. I appreciate your comment, ursa
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14th Jun 2021 10:07pm
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14th Jun 2021 10:31pm
Re. anticlimactic
15th Jun 2021 12:04pm
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15th Jun 2021 2:14pm
Re. anticlimactic
16th Jun 2021 5:37am
Try a new chef! :)
As they say, "variety is the spice of life". Yeah can't eat spaghetti every day. Your words have a sadness that rings true quite often. You are hungry, but even if you eat, the dish doesn't provide the nourishment needed.
As they say, "variety is the spice of life". Yeah can't eat spaghetti every day. Your words have a sadness that rings true quite often. You are hungry, but even if you eat, the dish doesn't provide the nourishment needed.
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Re: Re. anticlimactic
17th Jun 2021 11:34pm
thank you Leo, for stopping by and your thorough comment. I appreciate that you have taken the time. warmly, ursa 💜
Re. anticlimactic
19th Jun 2021 00:58am
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19th Jun 2021 1:18pm
thank you PoeticVonny, I appreciate your reading and your comment. appreciated, ursa 💜
Re: Re. anticlimactic
19th Jun 2021 1:18pm
thank you PoeticVonny, I appreciate your reading and your comment. appreciated, ursa 💜
Re. anticlimactic
15th Oct 2022 7:25am