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StreetSaxist Spirity'Diary / winter 2008
ete rnal rea lit y
he is indeed eternalreality crazyass'd oldering fo'ol
singin saxcriptures agrounded flutexistence in bleakwinter
streetmass col'chillwind whipparound thee corner willit
blowout yr flame someday'someevening? but-those-who
percieve'him &pay-thy-way wit [a di'stanted] lovin'preciation, merge-in-him,
released fr'om wheelies'o-birth&death,
maybe
or not.....
eternity won't clue 4g'ranteed nor4s'ure nor4
whoever coulda really thought "he'knew"
them'all, thee everycreature'one-of-us
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He is the eternal Reality, sing the scriptures, and the ground of existence.
Those who perceive him in every creature merge in him and are released from the wheel of birth and death.
-Shvetashvatara Upanishad
Published 21st Feb 2012
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23rd Feb 2012 6:02pm
oh Danny boy the horns and flutes are callin' but hey reality is fucking cold. Stand on that street long enough in winter and the only inevitable conclusion is that despite our wisdom, nature seems to be trying to kill us. I like this piece. Very wise and Upani-shady. Very cool. Sorry I've been away from commenting for a while, but I was busy being out of control in some other aspects of my life. I'll write it out soon. Good thinking like a human for a while and good reading you again.
both about this fine poem and about 'been away
from commenting' (and reading)
when i thought about DU, one of the things that
came to mind was reading some stuff and you're
on my mental list top three or so I'm finally
getting the hang of reading your poems at first
they came off as SO gimmicky but i've seen the
light there's really a soul to it some reason
and method though even more there's this basic
rhythm to it that speaks to my less rational
self or some such bullshit but whatever it's
good shit and i'll read some more even if i
don't say anything - ray
from commenting' (and reading)
when i thought about DU, one of the things that
came to mind was reading some stuff and you're
on my mental list top three or so I'm finally
getting the hang of reading your poems at first
they came off as SO gimmicky but i've seen the
light there's really a soul to it some reason
and method though even more there's this basic
rhythm to it that speaks to my less rational
self or some such bullshit but whatever it's
good shit and i'll read some more even if i
don't say anything - ray
24th Feb 2012 4:54am
is it the other end of a grommet?
Thank ye both Ray & Steve......i just moved 400sum miles t'blessed Florididia,& i ain't doin so hot on reading meself...eye respect ye both muy mucho as both writers & readers.....
peace&blessings/ dkzk
Thank ye both Ray & Steve......i just moved 400sum miles t'blessed Florididia,& i ain't doin so hot on reading meself...eye respect ye both muy mucho as both writers & readers.....
peace&blessings/ dkzk
16th Jul 2012 2:47am
intense... could feel the vibe fo sho. I don't believe the text does it justice... have to here these word ya know?!!?!!!
16th Jul 2012 3:29am
thank you, sir......
i LIVED-it for 7yrs....damnear 3000performances
i LIVED-it for 7yrs....damnear 3000performances
