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your love alone
a garland cinquain
kiss me
like that once more,
that i may know how deep
the fountains of love’s aquifer
reside.
reside
where shines the sun,
ere morning arrows past
and too soon evening covers me
with gloom.
with gloom
shall i not walk,
though heavy shadows stir
an appetite for requiem.
begone,
begone,
sad countenance!
what now the warbler’s song:
your song alone of love shall yet
my heart,
my heart
re-elevate.
for it esteems your name,
and every mountain quakes when you
kiss me.
kiss me
where shines the sun,
though heavy shadows stir;
your song alone of love shall yet
kiss me.
© Copyright 2021 June 07
by Clyve A Bowen♫
kiss me
like that once more,
that i may know how deep
the fountains of love’s aquifer
reside.
reside
where shines the sun,
ere morning arrows past
and too soon evening covers me
with gloom.
with gloom
shall i not walk,
though heavy shadows stir
an appetite for requiem.
begone,
begone,
sad countenance!
what now the warbler’s song:
your song alone of love shall yet
my heart,
my heart
re-elevate.
for it esteems your name,
and every mountain quakes when you
kiss me.
kiss me
where shines the sun,
though heavy shadows stir;
your song alone of love shall yet
kiss me.
© Copyright 2021 June 07
by Clyve A Bowen♫
Published 8th Jun 2021
Author's Note
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A garland cinquain is a six-stanza poem with five lines to each stanza. The successive lines (1-5) of the first five stanzas reprise in stanza six.
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A garland cinquain is a six-stanza poem with five lines to each stanza. The successive lines (1-5) of the first five stanzas reprise in stanza six.
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9th Jun 2021 2:59am
9th Jun 2021 7:04am
Thank you, Ahavati!
This is my first attempt at a garland cinquain. I daresay, it takes some calculation to let the final stanza coincide with the successive lines of the preceding stanzas.
In the long run, it is more than worth the effort.
Sincerely
cab
This is my first attempt at a garland cinquain. I daresay, it takes some calculation to let the final stanza coincide with the successive lines of the preceding stanzas.
In the long run, it is more than worth the effort.
Sincerely
cab
