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Saline on the lips (haiku)
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Stinging bit the ozone spits
Stunning, rollers pitch
A thrust, senses so bewitched
Stinging bit the ozone spits
Stunning, rollers pitch
A thrust, senses so bewitched
Published 30th May 2021
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30th May 2021 8:01pm
31st May 2021 2:33am
I truly adore haiku, slip.... this is just gorgeous...
You killed it in 17 syllables!
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You killed it in 17 syllables!
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31st May 2021 12:26pm
I like its challenge for the three lines of perfection Ps keep up the good work REgards SLip
