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OG
The original verse/ entered the unborn universe/
A breath of being/ in holographic boxes of paradoxes/
Unseen/ in a blind quantum state of seeing/ purely being/
Being/ in a state of unraveling and revealing/ revealed/
A cryptic concealment unfurled/ from a pristine stream/
Concealed/ to a prodigious beam/ revealed/ in a whirl/
Into an everlasting world/ inside of an ever expanding world/
Inside of a whirl/ the infancy of the latency of the vortex/
Weaving together light and shadow into a complex-complex/
Generating the stuff of the stars/ to be vaulted in the afars/
Very far afar/ ever-lasting-ever-expanding world in a whirl/
The original verse/ dispersed into that which came first/
That which came last/ that which came ever-after and after/
In echoes in the throes of evolution diffusion of the vast/
Consciousness conveyed/ the plans for the stars was laid/
In a wilderness made/ for the great and glorious parade/
As the stars self reflected/ and projected/ the idea for the mind/
The grand design/ mirror reflections aligned/ a supreme sign/
A glimpse of the divine/ composed of neurons stars blood & time/
And shadows of parsley sage & rosemary/ an ineffable glory/
A story/ written in letters and words in the language of the stars/
Expanded in the expansion/ permeating into the far and the afars/
The original verse/ began to converse with the human mind/
The divine design/ neurons stars blood & time/ a design divine/
The design became a mind/ a creator and a creation/ divine/
The mind of God/ a nameless-faceless place out of time and space/
The God mind/ out of space and time/ hidden in the design/
Concealed behind the face/ humankind began to take their place/
In perception/ as the words evolved and sprung forth/ from the source/
Having a course/ like celestial bodies and nobodies that become/
Somebodies/ in the revelation and realization of the one that is none/
Delivering verses that dispersed from the first and last as contribution/
To the original verse/ that defied understanding and comprehension/
Endless & Endlessness in Echoes
Published 30th May 2021
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OG
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30th May 2021 5:33am
Quiet, awesome....
Feels like a full produced Rap song....
How you're lyrics are synchronised perfectly with the beat it's quite awesome
Feels like a full produced Rap song....
How you're lyrics are synchronised perfectly with the beat it's quite awesome
30th May 2021 9:02am
Thank you pOt. That is a great compliment. I would very much like to experiment further. I have also been listening to music in a different way, I think. On a deeper level. But really, I have found that writing in general makes me look at all things on a deeper level.
Anonymous
- Edited 18th Nov 2021 8:45pm
30th May 2021 6:14am
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30th May 2021 9:04am
That is very cool, R. I really feel like I have been interacting with some strange energies and my highest ambition is to transfer this energy in furtherance of the Great Work of myself and others. And further and further into the multiverses and the omnivores.
Many thanks!
(I have some ideas and I will be contacting you sometime soon...)
Many thanks!
(I have some ideas and I will be contacting you sometime soon...)
Anonymous
- Edited 18th Nov 2021 8:45pm
30th May 2021 9:12am
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30th May 2021 11:51am
Cipher
You're expoding out
This is your Opus thus far
Your HOWL
Your voice is strong and urban
Your Rap
Yes and it counts !!
BIG ECHO LIKE
RL AWARD
You're expoding out
This is your Opus thus far
Your HOWL
Your voice is strong and urban
Your Rap
Yes and it counts !!
BIG ECHO LIKE
RL AWARD
31st May 2021 8:30am
PS
That is an incredibly cool and thought provoking comment, and I thank you greatly.
That is an incredibly cool and thought provoking comment, and I thank you greatly.
30th May 2021 11:51am
So powerful! I read it first to myself, then listened to your reading of it. The music adds so much, the spoken word emphasizes how the words flow. And the music ending at the end, makes the last few lines so powerful. Hard to find the right words, but this was such a cool experience! Thank you!
31st May 2021 8:31am
30th May 2021 1:11pm
Great poem. You should enter it in the "write a poem using the word original" competition.
31st May 2021 8:32am
