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Night
Night
And I wish for someone to know my soul
A dreamer's dream
I know
To know you
Who I have imagined for so long
Soft
Sweet kindness
Though love is oft a fire
The gentle calm within my storm
I wish for somebody...does so my heart
Does so my heart
When night's drawn out
Long and lone
No voice
No warmth
No peace to sleep
And when I do
You haunt the corners of my dreams
Night
And I wish for you
Does so my heart...
Night
Not blanketed with the busy of the day
It lies alone beneath the sheet
Naked there except for truth
Harrowed
Through long unquiet hours assailed
By the absence of a touch
A scent
Of you
Night
And I wish for someone to know my soul
And I wish for someone to know my soul
A dreamer's dream
I know
To know you
Who I have imagined for so long
Soft
Sweet kindness
Though love is oft a fire
The gentle calm within my storm
I wish for somebody...does so my heart
Does so my heart
When night's drawn out
Long and lone
No voice
No warmth
No peace to sleep
And when I do
You haunt the corners of my dreams
Night
And I wish for you
Does so my heart...
Night
Not blanketed with the busy of the day
It lies alone beneath the sheet
Naked there except for truth
Harrowed
Through long unquiet hours assailed
By the absence of a touch
A scent
Of you
Night
And I wish for someone to know my soul
Published 30th May 2021
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30th May 2021 9:42am
Dear AJ,
Heavy sigh of understanding and total swoon! Often I wish this...for all of us. You are THE bard of love poem’s. This is a real beauty. H🌷
PS the picture is a lovely addition
Heavy sigh of understanding and total swoon! Often I wish this...for all of us. You are THE bard of love poem’s. This is a real beauty. H🌷
PS the picture is a lovely addition
30th May 2021 10:36am
At one time or another all bide a quiet hour wishing for the one. I wasn't sure how this write would take, so thank you for kind words. 🌷
AJ,
Your unsureness need rest easy, as this ethereal plea of pure love and a soul to be fully known by that particular 'one'.... well, it is just breathtaking.... H, is 100% correct in saying that you are THE bard of love poems here within these DU walls. You're one of one's that I aspire to be even a tiny bit as exquisite as... I read a lot of your work and I'm always left so utterly moved and awestruck by your words and how you elicit such gorgeous beauty.... it's masterful. Thank you so much for those numerous opportunities.
That visual you selected really did accentuate to a T.
—It's a true pleasure
🌹-B
Your unsureness need rest easy, as this ethereal plea of pure love and a soul to be fully known by that particular 'one'.... well, it is just breathtaking.... H, is 100% correct in saying that you are THE bard of love poems here within these DU walls. You're one of one's that I aspire to be even a tiny bit as exquisite as... I read a lot of your work and I'm always left so utterly moved and awestruck by your words and how you elicit such gorgeous beauty.... it's masterful. Thank you so much for those numerous opportunities.
That visual you selected really did accentuate to a T.
—It's a true pleasure
🌹-B
30th May 2021 3:50pm
I am humbled and honored by the sentiments you've expressed, knowing full well you're a fine writer on your part. And before I let such praise go to my head, best to remember, I'm just your average Joe.
Thank you 🌹
Thank you 🌹
