the landscape at the marina

I immediately related the snails to trails, like bread-crumb trails to the water. Body's of water provide such relief, don't they? I feel it's because we are bodies of water ourselves, and feel as though we're coming home when near them.

I sensed the push-pull of this struggled, Ursa.

@ahavati thank you. This piece is an especially important one to me and yes, so much, so much push and pull; I appreciate you picking that up and sharing that with me. your comment about Being near a body of water. yes, yes, yes. water rests me, soothes me, as best as it can. I appreciate you. warmly, ursa

Dear U,

Ah yes, the solace within the place of peace before being found and the chase and hide begins again.
There is a baptism in water such as the ocean or lake at this point I’d settle for a kiddie pool. The message of unrest has its own heartbeat in this write and its very understandable and oh so relatable. I appreciate your succinct ability to get your message across in such brevity. I wish I had that gift. Great write.
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@Honoria, please make no mistake that you have all the gift and more. thank you for your reading, and your beautiful comment. I hold onto your words. 💜 warmly, ursa.

Nice light ... but heavy write ... great flow ... nice sibilance in the last stanza ...

thank you for reading and for your comment @LilDragonFly. I appreciate you, ursa

Different and engaging. Thanks and peace, oral

Thank you, oral, hope you're well. warmly, ursa

The wistful tone reminds me of Joni Mitchell. I would make a comment about the snails but my history with their cousins the slug haunts me; I don't want anymore on my kitchen counter and guitar case.

haha! thank you for sharing and sorry for your experience. Your comment is a compliment; I appreciate you. warmly, ursa