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Dropped lines
L onely as it may seem
I know I still have
F riends and the sight to
E nlighten others in my life
S earching for
A nswers that we
D ream of and we can
N ot reach far enough
E xternally grabbing what we cant
S ee instead we hold on to what we've
S een.
D reaming of the
E nd of the road we have paved
A fter all of theses years of
T ime has finally came to a
H alt.
D eath that doesn't exist in this
R ealm
E xisting only in our
A ctive imaginations
M early as dreams to those who are: In
Sane
Inspiring poet: Starstruck13
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same
19th Feb 2012 8:32pm
re: same
19th Feb 2012 11:20pm
Thank you very much. I was a virgin until this one. Starstruck13 inspired. So I gave it a whirl.
Dude
19th Feb 2012 9:14pm
This is very well done, it all feels naturally deep which is not easy to accomplish in a structured poem :)
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re: Dude
19th Feb 2012 11:22pm
Thank you dutty. Like I said it was my first. I guess it didn't turn out too bad. Thanks for the complement.
Too Cool
20th Feb 2012 3:05am
re: Too Cool
20th Feb 2012 3:23am
Gail...sarcasm from you? That's a new leaf. Thank you for your comment and smile. I needed that
re: re: Too Cool
20th Feb 2012 12:27pm
seriously you did an excellent job with this, I belong to another site and told them about this one, they liked mine and we are all doing the word "SUGAR". Getting some fun going. :)
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Re:dropped
25th Feb 2012 9:03am
That is a sure drop down simplicity in words perfected it.I have to try something like this.
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Re:dropped
25th Feb 2012 9:04am
That is a sure drop down simplicity in words perfected it.I have to try something like this.
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Re: Dropped lines
Anonymous
26th Mar 2013 11:26am
I really like acrostics, and they are quite hard to do in a way that makes the piece flow, and not just have random words because they fit.
You have absoloutly nailed it here, it flows perfectly. A good sentiment too.
Thank you for the read.
You have absoloutly nailed it here, it flows perfectly. A good sentiment too.
Thank you for the read.

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re: Re: Dropped lines
31st Mar 2013 9:21pm
Thank you miss sub for the comment you are always welcomed to read any of my work. I'm glad you stopped by. Thank you