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Till we met

those feelings I never felt
a hunger that I never knew
a desire like none ever till you
I once felt callus and cold
with you I felt vibrant and bold
feeling unlike any I felt before
in your desire I felt respected
you didn't just go the physically direction
you made me feel pure fresh and new  
the first I gave myself to
I felt your love was in ever touch
in my heart and soul just as much
you made me soar like an eagle
lifting me just short of heavens door
like no one had ever touched me before
you have awaken a desire to explorer
the physical, I once hid and ignored
a desire to make love even more
than just to calm the erotic storm
to make my new fantasies live and breath
to please and to be pleased to infinity
those feeling I  now want to imprint on you
that hunger I feel for you
a desire that is from my core
now is  vibrant and bold
baby your love is pure gold
this is what I desire
is what I want you to feel and see
Written by 4Her411
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Author's Note
my wife wanted to try her pen, and she her own 411. a tribute to the love she found in me
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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